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5 bars, put the rules on the house baby!

This battle is due in an hour, every hour late is a vote against the ladi or man.

*my check in so cute! heres my vote
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/anti- ... 18444.html

now where is your check in?

intrinsiccadence-abz-topical-vt18237.html#p150658

CHECK ..

What the boys be sayin?

She's a real devil, known to kill rebels, you won 3 out of 7, explains yer skill level
My speach make you feel treble, !LL dead you, B!tch got it locked like married men who will settle

Don't spit recycled ol game, like she's a bitch, dike, and hoe skank, despite you so lame
Controled all for blow but not likin cocain you can't "put it all together", writtin yo name!!

Shut this kid mouf, the plan, like feminist rallys I "STRIKE" cuz I did doubt the man
He's huff, I don't get shit out the grams, "drop sexy" like lingerie just slip out the hands

A ladi but my barrel clap, I don't "buy-Bull" but I read his verses, God I swear those wack!
I'm bad to the bone, where the marrow at, they say Lil mama block son out... like a "Sombrero Hat"!!

Ditch you like a past love, you sad scrub, ThatDude "never will last long" like a trashed buzz
ask thugs who the chick wit the ass was?!LLy! cut you on contact like freeze tag with glass gloves!!



1 !LL B!tch

expose
acts like a dude, cam in my pms acting hard road rage shit

[right]you in pms talkin shit, THINKIN YA ILL. mad like somebody CAME WITH THE STEAL and put it in your ANUS FOREAL.
shiit, i was THINKIN YA BILL, in state of road rage after TAKIN THEM PILLS.
now i'm FLAMIN UNTILL you explain your a male, U could picture Me Fight And Me Owning Him.
but nobody can picture u here loser in the near loser if we doodled you BY A DELOREAN.
losing streaK? you lost it already like a virginity, but i can expand your loses the same length of "hazard's nostrils",
yeah he got a big nose i gotta sick flow i dont think this BASTARDS HOSTILE, put'em in dirt now this FAG"s A FOSSILE.
fuck what u GOT FAGGIT, i rock tracks, and POP GATS QUICk, u aint GOT CASH KID,
cause the only time u see this bitch invest is in DOG FASHION. get your GOTH ASS KICKED.
i'm goin win in this planet, but i could of CAME OVER YOURS,
cause your losin this battle, like strange creatures who failed attempt to TAKE OVER EARTH, GAME OVER NERD.


EDIT; nothing changed

1 !LL B!tch wrote:What the boys be sayin?

She's a real devil, known to kill rebels, you won 3 out of 7, explains yer skill level
My speach make you feel treble, !LL dead you, B!tch got it locked like married men who will settle
lol word

Don't spit recycled ol game, like she's a bitch, dike, and hoe skank, despite you so lame
Controled all for blow but not likin cocain you can't "put it all together", writtin yo name!!
flow was dope... multi at the end bars were ...eh lil off but that punch and flow were nice

Shut this kid mouf, the plan, like feminist rallys I "STRIKE" cuz I did doubt the man
He's huff, I don't get shit out the grams, "drop sexy" like lingerie just slip out the hands
lol i dont get the "grams" filler but the punch was pretty creative

A ladi but my barrel clap, I don't "buy-Bull" but I read his verses, God I swear those wack!
I'm bad to the bone, where the marrow at, they say Lil mama block son out... like a "Sombrero Hat"!!
this shit was slick...the multis on point the puns were in depth

Ditch you like a past love, you sad scrub, ThatDude "never will last long" like a trashed buzz
ask thugs who the chick wit the ass was?!LLy! cut you on contact like freeze tag with glass gloves!!

heh that last punch was pretty creative, the setup was aite, but the flow was still nice


1 !LL B!tch

yea was pretty solid verse all in all

-- Thu Sep 23, 2010 11:19 am --

ThatSexyDude wrote:expose
acts like a dude, cam in my pms acting hard road rage shit

life is a bitch, no pun intended

[right]you in pms talkin shit, THINKIN YA ILL. mad like somebody CAME WITH THE STEAL and put it in your ANUS FOREAL.
shiit, i was THINKIN YA BILL, in state of road rage after TAKIN THEM PILLS
lol that was pretty funny
.
now i'm FLAMIN UNTILL you explain your a male, U could picture Me Fight And Me Owning Him.
but nobody can picture u here loser in the near loser if we doodled you BY A DELOREAN.
eh.. not as good as the opener

losing streaK? you lost it already like a virginity, but i can expand your loses the same length of "hazard's nostrils",
yeah he got a big nose i gotta sick flow i dont this BASTARD HOSTILE, put'em in dirt now this FAG"s A FOSSILE.
the multis were nice but the punch was just kinda lackin

fuck what u GOT FAGGIT, i rock tracks, and POP GATS QUICk, u aint GOT CASH KID,
cause the only time u see this bitch invest is in DOG FASHION. get your GOTH ASS KICKED.
i'm goin win in this planet, but i could of CAME OVER YOURS,
cause your losin this battle, like strange creatures who failed attempt to TAKE OVER EARTH, GAME OVER NERD.

was pretty nice closer the multis were good. the punch was wordy eh

EDIT; nothing changed

Punchs-bitch
Puns-TIE
Personals-Bitch *had better name flips i consider personal*
Multis-Bitch *she had couple iffy multis but over all came out*
Creative-TIE


Over all Lil bitch came with some nice flips and good flow and it sound better. Dude did his shit had some nice lines but over all i give it to her

VOTE-Bitch or w/e

ILL - No you do not need 2 links to battle. 1 for each battler.

I've seen you guys have both voted on a battle so it's straightened out.

Free-posts deleted.

Battle resumes.

1-0 ILL Bitch

She's a real devil, known to kill rebels, you won 3 out of 7, explains yer skill level
My speach make you feel treble, !LL dead you, B!tch got it locked like married men who will settle

feel treble? sounds a little forced to me. the rhymes were pretty nice and it had a nice flow but the punch came up short in the end. not that good of an opener.

Don't spit recycled ol game, like she's a bitch, dike, and hoe skank, despite you so lame
Controled all for blow but not likin cocain you can't "put it all together", writtin yo name!!

again, the rhymes here were kind of forced but i see what you were going for. the cocaine part was ehh but atleast there was a punch in there.

Shut this kid mouf, the plan, like feminist rallys I "STRIKE" cuz I did doubt the man
He's huff, I don't get shit out the grams, "drop sexy" like lingerie just slip out the hands

honestly i wasnt feelin this punch. you had a decent punchline in the works but you kind of dropped the ball on completing it.


A ladi but my barrel clap, I don't "buy-Bull" but I read his verses, God I swear those wack!
I'm bad to the bone, where the marrow at, they say Lil mama block son out... like a "Sombrero Hat"!!

this was the best punch you had in your verse, i was really diggin the wordplay but there wasnt much of a punch towards him. it was more bragging about yourself.

Ditch you like a past love, you sad scrub, ThatDude "never will last long" like a trashed buzz
ask thugs who the chick wit the ass was?!LLy! cut you on contact like freeze tag with glass gloves!!

trashed buzz? another forced rhyme there. the punch at the end was nice but again it was more about braggin about yourself.





[right]you in pms talkin shit, THINKIN YA ILL. mad like somebody CAME WITH THE STEAL and put it in your ANUS FOREAL.
shiit, i was THINKIN YA BILL, in state of road rage after TAKIN THEM PILLS.

this was a pretty funny line. had me crackin a little bit. i think you could have worded it a bit better though.

now i'm FLAMIN UNTILL you explain your a male, U could picture Me Fight And Me Owning Him.
but nobody can picture u here loser in the near loser if we doodled you BY A DELOREAN.

i think you meant to say in the near future but i got what you were going for. i got it but i dont think it was worded properly to give it that full sting, this punch fell short.

losing streaK? you lost it already like a virginity, but i can expand your loses the same length of "hazard's nostrils",
yeah he got a big nose i gotta sick flow i dont think this BASTARDS HOSTILE, put'em in dirt now this FAG"s A FOSSILE.

this made me chuckle as well. i think the set up was a bit long and you could have cleaned it up a bit but the punch wasnt that bad.

fuck what u GOT FAGGIT, i rock tracks, and POP GATS QUICk, u aint GOT CASH KID,
cause the only time u see this bitch invest is in DOG FASHION. get your GOTH ASS KICKED.

i liked the way you had these rhymes set up, but maybe i was missing something. i dont get the dog fashion line really, i mean it would be nice if she actually owned a dog and dressed it up but it really lacks the sting. not your best line here.

i'm goin win in this planet, but i could of CAME OVER YOURS,
cause your losin this battle, like strange creatures who failed attempt to TAKE OVER EARTH, GAME OVER NERD.

this was another cool little rhyme you had set up but the punch fell short man. not a good closer here, you should have ended it swingin.


honestly they both had their flaws and could have came a lot better if they put more time into it. im going to vote this shit a TIE though.

2-1 okwerd lol?

I don't know what NobelOne is on, don't vote if you really are not voting boy, TIE is a cop out, and you're a hater lol

Keep voting

punches:ill
personals:ill
flow:tie

vote:ill
hardly any personals but ill bitch got him with the nameplay,

2-0

1 !LL B!tch wrote:I don't know what NobelOne is on, don't vote if you really are not voting boy, TIE is a cop out, and you're a hater lol

Keep voting

bitch please, dont get mad because i thought your verse was trash. i only called it a tie because i couldnt decide which one was worse. both of yall had several things going wrong so thats how i voted. atleast i broke your battle down, its called feedback.

Strait battle... One edged..
She's a real devil, known to kill rebels, you won 3 out of 7, explains yer skill level
My speach make you feel treble, !LL dead you, B!tch got it locked like married men who will settle
Nice opener... the hottest line really shouldnt be in the 1st 1 but hot.

Don't spit recycled ol game, like she's a bitch, dike, and hoe skank, despite you so lame
Controled all for blow but not likin cocain you can't "put it all together", writtin yo name!!
complexitys gettin there... definatley nice tho

Shut this kid mouf, the plan, like feminist rallys I "STRIKE" cuz I did doubt the man
He's huff, I don't get shit out the grams, "drop sexy" like lingerie just slip out the hands
once again it was a hot drop.. kinda goin the same route but still killin him

A ladi but my barrel clap, I don't "buy-Bull" but I read his verses, God I swear those wack!
I'm bad to the bone, where the marrow at, they say Lil mama block son out... like a "Sombrero Hat"!!
no expo needed.. hot

Ditch you like a past love, you sad scrub, ThatDude "never will last long" like a trashed buzz
ask thugs who the chick wit the ass was?!LLy! cut you on contact like freeze tag with glass gloves!!
ehh seems like a forced end but its still strait..








[right]you in pms talkin shit, THINKIN YA ILL. mad like somebody CAME WITH THE STEAL and put it in your ANUS FOREAL.
shiit, i was THINKIN YA BILL, in state of road rage after TAKIN THEM PILLS.
now i'm FLAMIN UNTILL you explain your a male, U could picture Me Fight And Me Owning Him.
but nobody can picture u here loser in the near loser if we doodled you BY A DELOREAN.
losing streaK? you lost it already like a virginity, but i can expand your loses the same length of "hazard's nostrils",
yeah he got a big nose i gotta sick flow i dont think this BASTARDS HOSTILE, put'em in dirt now this FAG"s A FOSSILE.
fuck what u GOT FAGGIT, i rock tracks, and POP GATS QUICk, u aint GOT CASH KID,
cause the only time u see this bitch invest is in DOG FASHION. get your GOTH ASS KICKED.
i'm goin win in this planet, but i could of CAME OVER YOURS,
cause your losin this battle, like strange creatures who failed attempt to TAKE OVER EARTH, GAME OVER NERD.
your concepts are there but the rhyme scheme and punches arent up to par.. dont hate.. good battle.
Im not even sure votings still up but if it is my votes for 1 !LL...

damn why is my text sctructure mest up i remember i had it in the middle?

3-0 KO! WhooHoo! Thank you for the good battle ThatSexyDude, it was fun.

lets get this in the record books boys!