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Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 4:38 am
by TheNobleOne
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this was a track i did to the 50 cent beat when it came out. just a 24 bar exercise. let me know what yall think.
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:13 am
by Lawgix
not bad...
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:20 am
by TheNobleOne
appreciate it
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:22 am
by Momeijah
Lol I love the original song and beat, u shoulda put a hook in there man. Anyway this was cool u got good mic presence, didn't sound unnatural or shit. Flow was good but there are a couple of rests u took between words that I wouldn't agree with, kinda disrupted shit for me for a sec, but that's a minor issue, track was still nice.
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:55 am
by RedRacRecords
You got flow. I like your sound. "You got a problem with a ..." you kinda mubbled that cant make it all out. "I'm carving out a ??? out your chest peice" could really make that out either. Lyrically its a decent 24 thou.
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 4:26 am
by TheNobleOne
i appreciate the feed fellas. i prolly should post lyrics with the songs lol
you got a problem with the bar then raise it up
and
im carving "I love noble" on ya chest piece
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 9:13 am
by 1 !LL B!tch
Quality was most noticable to me but the overall song was pretty !LL you got a good flow and rhymes were also good, it was a good little drop, your voice sounds like ILL BILL with less rhymes, it was good, proud of you!
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:14 am
by NoVeL
You Happened To Use A Bar From My Latest Song, Now I Gotta Go Back To The Lab LOL. Flow Was Decent & Punches Hit Their Target. Work On Your Delivery & BREATHE Then You'll Be A God!
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 2:34 pm
by TheNobleOne
thanks ill bitch, appreciate the feed.
and yeah creative when i did this piece i was smokin a lot of weed and having problems with my throat and also my breath control. appreciate the feed though man.
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:08 pm
by Evans
Pretty nice, your flow is on point, only constructive criticism I can think of really would be to use multi syllables etc. but overall its dope!
Re: Get Up (Free verse)
Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 11:19 pm
by Flowetry
I love it homie, hook me up with some more of these brotha you are sick.