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[Lol_Munteskue]

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The second guy sounds like copywrite.

I don't feel the beat, you could just slip a better beat at the same tempo under your vocals.

Your right the beat doesn't hold your vocals nicely.

[IntrinsicCadence]

I understand your apprehension with this one. I still like it, though not quite as much as some of your other drops. I like the beat, and I like the flow, but it just doesn't seem to match up as it should. I also wasn't feel the flow in that last verse as much as most of what I've heard from you. If I was bumpin your CD while driving in my car, I'd probably occasionally skip past this one.

[TheNobleOne]

i think the beat was dope but the tempo could be a bit different to make it come together a bit better. that second guy does sound like copywrite lol and he held shit down man with that fast flow, i think he complimented the beat fairly well. i think the fast flow is more suitable for this slow tempo beat but the other guy rappin slow was just somethin different added to the track. his flow didnt fall off really until the end in a couple of parts. tracks was a pretty cool listen either way, keep doin ya thing.