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My track RECORD SHOWS you've now entered a HELLISH ZONE of a MENACE KNOWN/ for his UNPLEASANT ROLE to discredit the most JEALOUS FOES with their INCEPID TONE/ when the bullet PELLET BLOWS, it'll remove ya NECK & NOSE, & NEXT IT GOES through ya CHEST & TOES & leave FLESH EXPOSED/yeah, the METHOD'S BOLD & the MESSAGE COLD/I wasn't born to my mom as a PRECIOUS SOUL, I tore my way out her stomach using her PELVIC BONE/see the SPEECH IS REGAL, take a peek at a beast whose FEATS IS EVIL/tounge paints classics, my spit is canvas, TEETH IS EASEL/so when I reach for the heat, resistance is WEAK & FEEBLE/the bullets....I call 'em Donovans, how they turn ya skin red after they LEAVE THE EAGLES/

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Word. The multies in this are purdy clean, it flows tight in my head I could see people bein like "daaammm" after hearing you spitt this... all I really see in this tho is multies and flow. No story or nothin... but for what it is... you did ur thing man, keep em commin

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Nice multi's boy.

Digging the flow, must say you're "on fire" with those rhymes.

This was actually pretty clean as far as multi's go
I don't think it goes any further beyond that..
just like it'd be used for a freestyle just to pull out
and make everyone be like OHHHHH SHITTTTT
or something like that, either way you doin' your thing yet maaaan
keep it up!

Multi's strike hard. They propel the lyrics forward real smooth, and would sound ill as an audio piece. That being said, if this was an audio piece I'd probably only listen to it once or twice, since what your expressin' never really goes anywhere. You've definitely got a talent for the flow, and for the multis, but if you could spit something more interesting for me to listen to and think about, it'd hit more for me. But I'm much more of a lyrical hip-hop listener than I am simply a rhythm and flow hip-hop listener.

word man, pretty nice multis. had a cool flow to it. nothing real major though.

/I wasn't born to my mom as a PRECIOUS SOUL, I tore my way out her stomach using her PELVIC BONE

WTFFFFFFFFF!!!! LMAO

resistance is WEAK & FEEBLE/the bullets....I call 'em Donovans, how they turn ya skin red after they LEAVE THE EAGLES/

Also Very Dope....

I Like Reading ur drops.... Always Some Shit That Makes Me Laugh...dope Flow n Multies in there Too

dope crim lets collab on a real track nigga u got the necisarry equipment? cuz i found an engineer thats a genius just send me ur raw shit and itll be a masterpeice