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this was a cool concept, rhymescheme a bit bumpy, solid otherwise, good drop here

Could've been longer but it was cool for what it was. I thought the flow went fine from start to end, since it's such a short simple piece I can't really point out anything wrong since ur intentions were clear.

No mention of Big L? I stopped right there
although you did mention Big Pun and ODB...
but it kind of pisses me off when people forget L
especially Jam Master Jay, I mean this was a cool piece
but at the same time it feels like it's been done
I mean I thought you was going to go deeper...that's what she said
but you really didn't, you came off kinda corny to me in a way
like you just jumped between era's and forgot some of the better parts
like Kool Moe Dee and Busy Bee or KRS and MC Shan
either way...don't mind me you know...just saying

.....keep writing

Yeah i couldve jumped deeper in but i just wrote a page about some of the hip hop times i remember best
And i didnt forger about Big L just forgot to put him in this Piece Maybe im do a Part 2