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Posted: **Thu Oct 12, 2006 1:16 am**

the sleepless (k)nite daydreaming of 40 Winks, as minits go past in the Blink of an eye//
"ill do it later" are the words of a man whos hopes will be soon vilified//
the next day saying "ill do it tomorrow", youve unwittingly traduced everything you hope your day to derive//
a fools "interest" is "confounded" daily, untill everything is such a tangled mess that hes terrified//
do not let life pass you by...
or youll be stuck in cessation, witnessing children building castles with the sands of time//

took a line i had in my notebook, and expanded the idea, could be done better,

yes its very complicated, i over complicated it on purpose, its part of the metaphor lol,

i donno, let me hear what ya think

Posted: **Thu Oct 12, 2006 9:32 am**

yea i like this...very different...good stuff donnie

Posted: **Thu Oct 12, 2006 10:22 am**

Depth wrote:good stuff donnie

LMAO it's good donnie real good...

Posted: **Thu Oct 12, 2006 12:44 pm**

yeah it was a Nice peace...

Posted: **Thu Oct 12, 2006 2:10 pm**

well...it is haha, am i bieng mocked?...

Posted: **Thu Oct 12, 2006 8:49 pm**

thanks for the feed, nah i think hes laughin at my name lmao, (bad idea) haha

Posted: **Mon Oct 16, 2006 1:51 pm**

Donnie...this is sooo good, i think you have earned these ( . Y. ) << breasts...hahah Yes!

Posted: **Sun Mar 16, 2008 10:08 am**

wow, when the fuck did i do this? i didnt know i had anything in this section lmao, damn i did do alot of drinkin last year

Posted: **Sun Mar 16, 2008 4:04 pm**

dude i remember when you posted this... haha long ass time ago.

Posted: **Mon Mar 17, 2008 2:37 pm**

Holy fuck I didn't even know you knew where DC was...lol. Visit more often. Also, I love it.

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