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crazy jawn with alotta flavor

I like this.

crazy jawn with alotta flavor
though it seems the horns go off key a bit here and there, and i'd agree with rugg that a bit more realistic horns could improve it. A bit of a fade out or something at the end would also be nice.

Freekey written to it---
This demonic symphonic, like a sonic blast,
is upon us fast, and I'm all up on it like a cast.
I'll write my sonnets on it, and surpass past
the past that latched its wrath on the path.
I don't need to ask cats, cuz my raps answer that task,
cuz my verbal dance responds to the questions I be on,
and my words are like a lance, stabbin' straight into the answers.
Plans burst from my stance, and they can't hurt cuz I understand what I am,
I'm a man, and I've suffered, but I've buffered my soul clean, damn.
I hold these jams close, fam, and don't fold, no, cuz I can't.
And I never ran, and even when the dams crash, I still stand.
Bam, can you hear the fortitude that is bumpin' through me, dude,
I ain't gonna waver or sink into the blues, and I savor what I do.
My behavior isn't the same as you, cuz that's what I choose.
I hold tight to my blood as it oozes- out with every bump and bruise.
This music's hues hit you if the shoes fit...