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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=arsxJdC9cJE[/video]

I'ma uncontrolled mixture of emotion and confidence
been stuck in this dream to the point I'm lost in it
stuck in limbo, but it's simple, I'm just a symbol
spinnin' outta control, with this front on my mental
tryna keep anyone from entering or tryna control me
solely cuz I think I know me, maybe I'm my one and only
my homies, they never think there's a problem with me
simply cuz I keep a smile on, hopefully no one gets me
just another beat to style on, so if your profiles on
and you got signed, look at me, just another wild thought
someone that can't be cracked, kick rocks into the rehab
spit thoughts into weed bags, waitin' for the brain to relapse
maybe I'm more complex then known, or just the hints go..
unnoticed, I left it upon myself to personally end zone
I heard it all before it all seems to combine, factors in
and at that point all the rumors are just Sunshine Anderson
once time collabs again, I age before my eyes with a broken clock
another 5 bucks is broken off, to help a girl I only know is lost
to the point she exposed my thoughts, like she the key to the door
or maybe she knows simply cuz I'm the type she's seen before
at this point I start to treat love like I'm singin' New Edition
if it isn't what I think it is, why am I so consumed up in it?
things get more complicated by the second, another fight
till we start arguing like why don't you just get another life
see I would, but it ain't that simple for someone to approach
you can never tell what's really goin' on until you see it up close
but no one puts themself out there just to be another lost soul
life ain't what I thought though, another misled combo...
just there to go through the same thing like it'll get any better
I mean if we followed the flock then maybe we can get through any weather?
but that's never the excuse but that's all it really seems to be tho?
never agreeing on a thing, so of course we ain't been on equal..
grounds, now i'm going through problems at the job like what?
I could keep going but honestly I'm leave it with a slight buzz....
before I know it time's up, and I seem stuck in this neverending mix
I can't figure out where the ending is, I could never be sensing bliss
I find myself cornered by the idiots who claim they really might know me
but still I feel lonely, to the point I think I'm ready to just blow trees
forget the world and float off into some sort of non-existance
I lost persistance, or maybe I still got it, I'm just not predicted
as being the better person, gotta close up shop and get some better curtains
the window to my soul can't be seen, but I know you got every purpose
on pursuing a deeper me, and that makes me feel like I can reach infinity
touch the stars and beyond, only if your really taking that shot with this dream
I can never say I'm ready to get to this point in time where I enjoy the night
rolling over only to see you next to me, in that shade of exposing light
smiling, I know it's right but I can never take that step unless I KNOW it's right
sadly I keep to myself and just keep wondering what could've been
I guess everything always looks better when you on the outside lookin in...

(damn)

Smooth shit QZ
"to the point she exposed my thoughts, like she the key to the door
or maybe she knows simply cuz I'm the type she's seen before
at this point I start to treat love like I'm singin' New Edition
if it isn't what I think it is, why am I so consumed up in it?"
Unfortunatly I had to turn off the beat (love that instrumental by Keys too) cause I couldn't find the flow. It's 86 BPM for this instru and your lyrics read much faster than that so everytime I tried to slow it down, I had to pause too many times throughout the lines for it to flow well.

But still the piece read pretty solid after I turned off the instrumental.