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This is a project i been meaning to finish but havent been able to get it recorded due for various reasons, but ill be recording again within a month or so.
I have recorded my first verse but this is still being worked on. Another, FREEMASON EXPOSE', ive wrote a good bit about this stuff, and you guys seem to be interested in it, so i thought id drop another for you guys. Leave links, or drop your threads title and ill return the favor.
First verse is finished, the 2nd one is still in the work.

VERSE 1:

since the dawn of time they made a pagan religion/
mixed with mystic symbols - that was satans decision/
and now the matrix within it displayin vision of strife/
witness the might he brought forth with wisdom and light/
so listen im not dissin but theyre twistin the laws/
and taintin our nations claimin that we simply evolved/
that aint the reason at all (NAH) that im gettin pissed off (DAWG)/
its Ridiculous these Hypocrites that spit on the cross/
their system involved was not effiecient at all/
the mission is flawed it was not even written by god/10
im just sick and appauld from all of their contradictions
they want the best for man but were their opposistion
making toxic rivers and chokin on smog emissions
then leave us fuckin broke with not a pot to piss in
and its sickening were striken with the lies thats given
its time to take a fuckin stand an start fight the wicked


HOOK:
you can join lucifers clan or execution is planed
so we must do what we can or we choose to be damned
to fight the new world order - and be truly a man
its time to take a stand our retributions at hand
(HOOK IS ALSO A WORK IN PROGRESS)

VERSE TWO:

(WILLIAM COOPER QUOTE)
"Create a one world totalitarian socialist government"....
(ME)and the sheeple are still wondering who the Puppet Is/
maybe the public is and its making me Fuckin Sick/
that they killed Bill Cooper and Blatantly Covered It/
And i aint Debating with Masons/
Theyre the Creation of Satan/
Basically Saying theyre Racist/
Blatantly Hating the races/
Making the greatest invasion/
Creating their basic oasis/
Im training the nation to face it/
To Break away from the fakeness/
If you Read through the pages of the Secrets of ages/
Their reasons are Stated to bring a season of changes/



Like i said its still a work in progress but id like to have this finished and done by this year, and i got someone to collaborate on it. The beat i have is by Shadowville, forgot the name of it at the moment, ill post it when i find it.

Dope..cant wait 2 hear this .
def. did your homework

since the dawn of time they made a pagan religion/
mixed with mystic symbols - that was satans decision/
and now the matrix within it displayin vision of strife/
witness the might he brought forth with wisdom and light/

very nice flowed smooth.

"Create a one world totalitarian socialist government"....
(ME)and the sheeple are still wondering who the Puppet Is/
maybe the public is and its making me Fuckin Sick/

i love this conspiracy shit..
content is solid, flow is great..

go record that shit

word, thanks for the props Abz, hopefully itll sound as good when i go to record it.

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You weren't joking when you said we have similar writing styles. Excellent rhyme schemes and great flow. Dug the material as well. I think the first verse was much more powerful and polished, but the whole drop is dope.

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no doubt man thanks for taking the time to read it. I may just completely scratch the whole 2nd verse and rework it using that type of multi scheme though.

This is dope, i like the topic and you executed it nicely, its nice to read something different for a change

its Ridiculous these Hypocrites that spit on the cross/
their system involved was not effiecient at all/
the mission is flawed it was not even written by god/

this was my favorite part but i enjoyed all of it, nice syllable placement also, good stuff dude

That Was A Good Read Good Topic And Flowed Great

Thanks fellas. and lol@ RE, he gettin rugged on that breakdown haha.

Thanks for the insight on it. Ill try reworking some stuff but i still have to finish writing it to the beat. Thats why some lines have like, "extra words" in it you could say is to fit the beat better, like that "Start to fight the wicked" but i can probably adjust it to where i say it slower or diff etc.

Thanks for everyone checking it out.

And ill try to get to some of yalls work later on today.

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