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Stop frontin' like you got a lotta swagger. Bitch, stop the chatter
cause even you said it yourself in your profile - you are not a rapper

Interests: I AM NOT A RAPPER -- Poetry, Writing Novels & Screenplays, Directing, Reading, Drawing, School.

When I'm handed a mic, I attack it, but this bitch prefers gaggin'
and he got his name from a Greek god, which we all know were faggots

You probly sing your lyrics in high pitch and love ta wear voilet
cause judgin' by this..



you and Justin Beiber have the same hair stylist

You don't grip toast and squeeze, ya fairy. You clutch rosaries, ya Mary
so on a TV is the only time "RE" is close ta bein' scary ( Resident Evil )

You think you got this with ease ? Don't get cocky, ya geek
cause subliminally, even your avy is payin' homage ta me

Rugged Eros wrote:Getting played 24/7, 365, always online cuz he's got no real homies to ride with//
We all know only peep's that'll pay to check out '360 live' is lonely ass white kids//
~That was pretty funny, decent name flip
Right bitch?

Die quick, pussy had to steal his name from an Australian battler cuz he ain't intelligent//
Then turned around n' pretended he sweated Beanie, but like Beans that claims irrelevant//

Ain't gotta lie to be cool -- http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/beani ... 17174.html

N' here's a late development, ain't nobody a fan of this loser//
THE NEWS IS OUT, '360's Gay As Fuck' n' I ain't talking bout Anderson Cooper/
~The multis have been pretty nice so far, didnt get the "sweated Beanie" line but sounds personal.Rest was pretty good

REtire like a flat & change face, all you do is take space, how these flames taste?//
Ya keep trying to turn ya' shitty record around... but always end up in the same place//
nice name flip again, had some imagery to it, punch was pretty good
360 - basically 50% win percentage

Try drawing a 360, it's always a zero, press the panic cuz ya text's been damaged//
The truth: only time 360 'comes full circle' is when he's playing with himself next to faggots//
~this punch could have been worded a lil diff i think, but i got it. id say somethin like "circle jerk" or something like that. but still a good closer

-- X-Box 360 Live
-- There's an Australian Battler named 360
-- Anderson Cooper has a show called Anderson Cooper 360, plus he's gay.

that was a pretty good battle verse, had couple rough edges but over all a good verse.

-- Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:50 am --

360 wrote:Stop frontin' like you got a lotta swagger. Bitch, stop the chatter
cause even you said it yourself in your profile - you are not a rapper
lol that was pretty good intro

Interests: I AM NOT A RAPPER -- Poetry, Writing Novels & Screenplays, Directing, Reading, Drawing, School.

When I'm handed a mic, I attack it, but this bitch prefers gaggin'
and he got his name from a Greek god, which we all know were faggots
decent punch with a good flip, but the punch could have been better

You probly sing your lyrics in high pitch and love ta wear voilet
cause judgin' by this..



you and Justin Beiber have the same hair stylist
good multi setup with a personal

You don't grip toast and squeeze, ya fairy. You clutch rosaries, ya Mary
so on a TV is the only time "RE" is close ta bein' scary ( Resident Evil )
pretty good name flip, kept the flow goign

You think you got this with ease ? Don't get cocky, ya geek
cause subliminally, even your avy is payin' homage ta me
and a pretty good closer. over all another good verse

-- Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:54 am --

My Verdict

Punchs-Tie
Multis-RE
Personals-360
NameFlips-tie
Word Play-Tie

Fav Lines:
360

You don't grip toast and squeeze, ya fairy. You clutch rosaries, ya Mary
so on a TV is the only time "RE" is close ta bein' scary ( Resident Evil )

R E

REtire like a flat & change face, all you do is take space, how these flames taste?//
Ya keep trying to turn ya' shitty record around... but always end up in the same place//

These were the best lines in to battle IMO. Im give it to RE for this quoted, that flip was pretty clever.

VOTE-Rugged Eros

Getting played 24/7, 365, always online cuz he's got no real homies to ride with//
We all know only peep's that'll pay to check out '360 live' is lonely ass white kids//

Not too creative and the multie was kind of weak. 2/5

Die quick, pussy had to steal his name from an Australian battler cuz he ain't intelligent//
Then turned around n' pretended he sweated Beanie, but like Beans that claims irrelevant//

Decent personal. Could've been worded better, though. 3/5

N' here's a late development, ain't nobody a fan of this loser//
THE NEWS IS OUT, '360's Gay As Fuck' n' I ain't talking bout Anderson Cooper//

This was a pretty sick name flip. Best bar of the battle, IMO. 4/5

REtire like a flat & change face, all you do is take space, how these flames taste?//
Ya keep trying to turn ya' shitty record around... but always end up in the same place//

This was your best bar rhyme wise but the punch was kind of weak. Not bad, though. 3/5

Try drawing a 360, it's always a zero, press the panic cuz ya text's been damaged//
The truth: only time 360 'comes full circle' is when he's playing with himself next to faggots//

Wasn't really doing it for me. Especially as a closer. Faggots and damaged doesn't really rhyme either. 2/5


A good verse but not a great verse. I think you focused too much on the name flips and not enough on the rhyme scheme or punches. Flow was iffy. 14/25

Stop frontin' like you got a lotta swagger. Bitch, stop the chatter
cause even you said it yourself in your profile - you are not a rapper

Nice personal and multies. 3/5

When I'm handed a mic, I attack it, but this bitch prefers gaggin'
and he got his name from a Greek god, which we all know were faggots

Decent personal. Flowed nice. 3/5

You probly sing your lyrics in high pitch and love ta wear voilet
cause judgin' by this..you and Justin Beiber have the same hair stylist

Another nice personal. 3/5

You don't grip toast and squeeze, ya fairy. You clutch rosaries, ya Mary
so on a TV is the only time "RE" is close ta bein' scary (Resident Evil)

Nice name flip and the 6 syllable multi was pretty good. Though it felt a bit forced. 3/5

You think you got this with ease ? Don't get cocky, ya geek
cause subliminally, even your avy is payin' homage ta me

Decent closer. 3/5


Another good verse with some nice personals and I could really feel the flow in this verse. Def lacked with the wordplay and punches though. 15/25



Overall, I have to give this to 360. He kept it a little more consistent and wrote more of a battle verse where as Rugged had some better punches that really lacked in the rhyming department. RE was also weighed down by a couple of weak bars despite having what I thought was the best punch in the match.

+1 360

Rug...

THE NEWS IS OUT, '360's Gay As Fuck' n' I ain't talking bout Anderson Cooper/
lil' shakey, but Proper
-----------------------------------

360...

he got his name from a Greek god, which we all know were faggots
Kool idea haha, not worded for high impact tho

cause subliminally, even your avy is payin' homage ta me
I get it, but ehh...
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Ideas...Rug
personals..R
punches..Tie

Overall.. Rugged Eros dude just got at 360 with more direct shots, though the greek line was my fav' of this boutthere wasn't enough support for it from anywhere else.

Thanks for the votes..

2 votes ta 1 in Rugged's favor

Getting played 24/7, 365, always online cuz he's got no real homies to ride with//
We all know only peep's that'll pay to check out '360 live' is lonely ass white kids//

lol good opener, i actually like it.

Die quick, pussy had to steal his name from an Australian battler cuz he ain't intelligent//
Then turned around n' pretended he sweated Beanie, but like Beans that claims irrelevant//

Ain't gotta lie to be cool -- beanie-sigel-trying-stay-relevent-vt17174.html

no man, dont like this at all. sure you got a personal, just wasn't hitting man.

N' here's a late development, ain't nobody a fan of this loser//
THE NEWS IS OUT, '360's Gay As Fuck' n' I ain't talking bout Anderson Cooper//

haha good one

REtire like a flat & change face, all you do is take space, how these flames taste?//
Ya keep trying to turn ya' shitty record around... but always end up in the same place//

360 - basically 50% win percentage

no...

Try drawing a 360, it's always a zero, press the panic cuz ya text's been damaged//
The truth: only time 360 'comes full circle' is when he's playing with himself next to faggots//

this is alright should stay away from the cum wordplays.





top frontin' like you got a lotta swagger. Bitch, stop the chatter
cause even you said it yourself in your profile - you are not a rapper

Interests: I AM NOT A RAPPER -- Poetry, Writing Novels & Screenplays, Directing, Reading, Drawing, School.

decent opener, personal was ok

When I'm handed a mic, I attack it, but this bitch prefers gaggin'
and he got his name from a Greek god, which we all know were faggots

this is ok..

You probly sing your lyrics in high pitch and love ta wear voilet
cause judgin' by this..



you and Justin Beiber have the same hair stylist

you should of worded it better, this was alright, just didn't come as hard as you could of made it.

You don't grip toast and squeeze, ya fairy. You clutch rosaries, ya Mary
so on a TV is the only time "RE" is close ta bein' scary ( Resident Evil )

good bar. this is ya strongest bar in the verse.

You think you got this with ease ? Don't get cocky, ya geek
cause subliminally, even your avy is payin' homage ta me

no..



Rugged eros gets my vote. His verse was just more creative, and entertaining. You both did well actually, just need to spend more time writing ya shit. When yall get the time please leave feed back on this piece i wrote..

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/sage- ... 18264.html

Z.X.Y. - That 360 same place line, you gotta look at the nameflip in it, though the records part is irrelevant, doing a 360, you're just spinning in circle. Liked that bar a lot.

Both battlers I believe could have came harder in this battle. Both had pretty good lines.

360 - Some of your lines are poorly worded. Worded properly they hit with much more impact and you could've possibly taken this battle had your punches hit harder.

That Bieber line did have my laughing though.

Rugged - That damaged/faggots line could've been done a lot better. I know you're more creative than trying to rhyme those 2 words.

Overall - Rugged.

Good, close battle though.

4-1 T.K.O.

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