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thanks for checkin this out tru i appreciate that.i know youre an audio kat so props for readin his
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wow this was very impressive, loved every single line!!! i wont bother quoting bcuz id quote it all this is def something i want to read again lol really great one of the best i've read, in my opinion atually something with a deep meaning behind it and u got ur message across great! just very impressed awesome!
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like i said in my earlier feed this shit is sik bruh..no doubting that one...
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Since Vietnam i could tell things were wrong...
Way back in 1965 when i was honorbly discharged...
Not really pissed off, but decided to join up with Naval Intelligence...
They said id get a hefty payload if i was Able to Settle In...
Start Taking their Medicine like ephedrine Laced with a Sedative..
Oh I forgot to mention this, its a Break in the Precedent...
No Mistaken the Evidence theyre even Replacing the President...
And our Nation is faced with Erasing our Edicate...
We must bring an end to it, they cant guide the evolution of man...
Preach a green earth but keep on pollutin the land...
Theyre inducing confusion making people stupid an useless...
Back from feudal Japan, using symbols like the vantruvien Man...
It went from Greece to Rome, where they Teach the Drones...
Where greed controls us now from our Streets and Homes...
They Preach of Souls, back from Ancient Egyptian Descriptions..
Of scriptures predicting a picture for future events Writtin in Heiroglyphics...16...
Great imagery. Describes how a man had shit happen to him from the system and you could see his thoughts start to realize how he's been controlled, and how long the control over masses has existed. Conscious vibe, intelligent thought. On point with the multis as always.
It wasnt the Pharos who ruled but the Egyptian Priests...
Back then, that was A.K.A the Christian Belief...
Whatever you Witnessed or seen actually has you Bitches Decieved...
Just like you Picture a Dream, its made up, but this Isnt a Scheme...
Its the Vision of Greed, thats excelled cuz you Didnt Believe...
Like 1000s of "Christian" Freemasons who Achieved 33 Degrees...6...
They gathered in trees an crowded beneath was the Bohemian Grove...
So if seeing is believing, then i aint believing a soul...
Theyre Deciving the World, cause theyre pagans and heathans...
The Media reads what is told, they aint relaying the meaning...10
Ya Straining to see it, blaming whoever is Training the Legion...
But in reality, if you challange kings, you aint PLEDGING ALLEGIANCE!...
For Sensitive Reasons, but look back at Stanley Kubrick, a Straight Prodigy...
But do you have your Eyes Wide Shut about the Space Odyssey???...
If you have faith solemnly, do ya research but dont Pretend To..
I hope you intend to find message, untill then its To Be Continued...
So if seeing is believing, I ain't believing a soul. Hard hitting line. And it's dope how this addresses the issue of people who talk about change, but just sit around and pretend while everything still happens. Good shit.

This is probably one of the better writtens on the site. 9/10. Keep it up.
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