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Something I Whipped Up Testing Out The New Cool Edit Flip Gave Me.. I Thought I'd Polish Some Lyrics While I Did It Too. Lemme Know How The Quality in This Audio is So I Could Have The Same Effect in My Battle With Dynamiq.


Also Lend A Ear To This Joint, I Was Talking About The Relationship Wit My X.

Lyrics:

Pain
I See You The Size of A Horseshoe
Kick Me in My Spine Chris Reeves'll Neva Walkthrough
Penatrate My Mind & That's Enough of My Thoughts Poof!
Couldn't Be My Treasure, This Jury'll/Jewelry'll Bail A Courtroom
Damn
Quit Sayin That Your The Best of Me
Playin A Game of Chess
Arrangin That You'll Come Check on Me
As Far As I'm Concerned
You've Faded From My Mental... Cease!
I'm Movin' Forward in Order 2 Lay & Rest in Peace
Next 2 Me
I See A Picture Framed of Our Memories
Can It Be
You Was Contemplatin' On Savin' Candle Grease
Later On 2 Savor On
Burning Bridges Wit Ya Family You Played A Nigga Like Ya Favorite Song
I'm Tired & Later On, The Fire'll Wait Upon
The Liar & Scaly Jawn Who Conspired A Way 2 Harm
Don't Worry Bout Me I'm Just Waitin' On My Next Break
A Way 2 Here My Voice is On The Next Tape!!

quality def a lot better now...all u need is a mic now....g luck on the battle

Definetly a step up in quality. Flow sounds real good. Maaaan. This is cool dawg. Wit this setup, u should do real well man

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Flow was pretty much on point. Good looks on posting the lyrics. It makes it much easier to follow along. Quality was good but not great. Like TOYH said, I would lower the beat a bit.

quality is ok , beat is high as stated above..IMO u need 2 put more umph,more passion..flow is solid ,but your delivery is familiar 2 alot ppl i've been hearing lately, not a bad thing, but not a great thing.

stay up homie

I like the flow, I'd agree with Abz that a little more passion might be nice, and a better mic might do wonders. Your voice sounded just a little constipated at the "bail a courtroom" point, but other than that the flow is smooth and sounds nice. I look forward to hearing more from you, I think with your voice and your style you could create some real nice shit.