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Let me know how you like this story flow...

Just to let ya'll know, when I record the final draft of this one, I'm gonna change up the ending a bit. Instead of having the character die and transform his life on his death bed, I'm not gonna make it end a bit more abruptly and have a short flow about the current state of hip-hop

intro need 2 be turned up alittle, vox also,beat kinda overwhelms the track ..NASTY FLOW..damn..
i'm have 2 listen 2 this a couple times to pick up the whole story
so far very nice my man..
i suggest maybe turning the tempo down alittle, 2 so your flow just a little,so ppl can follow the story easier.

another solid drop..love that beat

flow was crazy on this some minor flubs here and there in it that you can probably hear, delivery seemed to fall off at points when you slowed down the tempo maybe cause you were winded or something? beat was pretty dope just didn't like the rhodes-like sound in it, lyrics flowed well but like abz said i didn't really catch them very well on the first listen not cuz they weren't clear but cuz the rhythm of the flow & beat made it easy listening which isn't really a bad thing

Once again having that Gorillaz, Deltron 3030 sound.

I've got to say of the three tracks that you posted today this one impressed me the most on a lyrical level (which is what I feel I'm most apt to be critical of) is this one.

Soul Reflection | Dedication

The flow fell off half way through the track for some reason. You need a dope engineer to balance out the sound on a few of these tracks. I wouldn't worry about that too much though because that's all in the growing process. In a year, I doubt you will have any similar problems.

Uppin... Wanted to thank the three of you for you real solid feedback on this one. All three of you have dropped some feedback that is truly helpful as I think about re-recording this, which I am about to do. This is the kinda feedback that can really aid improvement. Hope more cats will give this kinda real feedback to drops.

Your style is catchy as fuck and goes well with this beat. U need to clarify ur vocals tho ya engineer needs ta step it up especially with ur style u need a hardworking engineer. other than that id say it was pretty dope

man that is a pretty dope track the flow was pretty sick i have to say had that fast then slow but still faster than normal, and the best went well with that touch on it, yeah the lyrics were quite good aswell really kept the flow going consistent keep this shit comin man and i'm about to pm you see if i can help you out

100% on the flow and lyrics. Only thing I can say is to turn the vocals up about 1-2.5 DB. Very well thought out and put together perfectly to this instrumental. Big ups.