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[[Rough draft]] Wherever you go

Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:08 am
by Leeroy Jenkins
Beat needs to be reworked because its extremely basic but I'm really trying to figure out the 2nd half of the chorus. I could just repeat the melody with different lyrics but I'm never satisfied with that lol


When it feels right baby, call my name
When you feel like you're goin insane
Hop into the car with me, we'll go wherever you like
And we can watch the street lights crawl in through the window
As long as I'm with you, wherever you go

She so hollywood, wanna party all the time
In her mind she trynna live out her prime
Not the type to recline, would rather do a few lines
and then wake up in the morning and down a bottle of shine
That's fine, having fun could never be a crime (crime)
She wondering 'what do you imply?' (ply, ply)
Everything distorted her mind (mind, mind)
Comin out sounding like blah blah blah
Fine, baby throw it all aside
We don't gotta worry about a thing tonight
uh come take a ride, I'll get you to where you wanna go
If you don't know then we'll follow the road
Until world is bombing your phone
Hitting you up and calling you home
Hop into the car with me, we'll go wherever you like

And we can watch the street lights crawl in through the window
As long as I'm with you, wherever you go

Re: [[Rough draft]] Wherever you go

Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:35 am
by FlipSide
nice singing on the hook...good delivery for a soft track.. good adlibs there as well...even some auto tune in there... nice drop on some different shit.... finish this up and ull have skirts all over lol