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Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:46 am
by Crisis
Two minute preview for Conspiracy.

Ayo,

I got burners and gats, on the corner servin' up crack,
on the block where kids get popped and purses get snatched !

My raps perfect infact, you can't handle the flow,
I'll embarass the fuck outta you when I battle you bro.

I don't mean to hurt your feelings, but YOU being LYRICAL, dude,-NOT-revealing.
I'll stay above this nigga his whole career like ROOFTOPS-and-cielings !

The kid is hot, just look at these hopeless dudes,
Couldn't overcome my sick style with Tylonol cold & flu.

Times up, over, SCHOOLED.



Could get way more personal, but I'll call them shots out later.

Hate on me.

Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:58 am
by complexity
First line was slick, not much of a diss

lol, third bars punchline was pretty hot.

Conspiracy better get his game up

Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 3:38 am
by Invincible
lmao at two minute preview

Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 3:43 am
by Ambiguous Realm
i hate u.. not becuz u said so but becuz i used that rooftops and ceilings punchline 3 years ago after it was already said to have been played out...so r u going to battle him or wat...

Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 6:06 am
by Crisis
Haha, you wouldn't understand that punch anyways,
you didn't see the conversation.

Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 6:12 am
by Ambiguous Realm
i wouldn't understand the punch? or the personal?.. the punch is obvious so dont get ahead of urself

Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 6:17 am
by Crisis
*Correction

You wouldn't understand the personal in that punch, you didn't see the convo.

Happy?

Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 4:03 am
by precise
well then, enlighten us

Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 7:35 am
by Invincible
I SMELL O-W-N-A-G-E

Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 8:07 am
by drunken jesus
this was alright, really simple though work on writing lines with depth and creativity

don't ever use a sick-flu/cold type line again, that shits been played out since like '94