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Verse for Casper
Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 5:35 am
by Quix
he no showed ... so heres mah verse!
check .. i'll post soon
look theres no Escaping Quix, you only hear ohhhhhhhhhhhh shit...if we Rate your diss
watch ... This cat will Fry ... then we'll witness 'Casper slide' like Skateboard Tricks
this cats sad .. the type who can't Support his wife .. i'm addicted to the rush like i Snort dah Hype!
so watch me Thump this Ferry ... cuz and dah only 'Pump you Carry' IS FOR your BIKE
lets watch him Choke, FOR cheep thrillS ... but by the end this battle i bet this Joke will be Killed
I may be mistaken ... BUT this whole time i thought 'Ghost writers' were Supposed to be ILL
you should only Talk what you know .. thats why i preech about dah Glock and dah scope
or Boxing yah Folks ... cuz you garbage and only 'See Cheers' when Washing yah cloths (cheer is a detergent for your Laundery)
Quix a Monster .... Casper wants us tah think he gangsta and his G's are wid-him,
your prolly terrified standing there 'shaking in yah shoes' like a Siesure Victim
Re: Verse for Casper
Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:59 am
by Cee4
Quix wrote:he no showed ... so heres mah verse!
check .. i'll post soon
look theres no Escaping Quix, you only hear ohhhhhhhhhhhh shit...if we Rate your diss
watch ... This cat will Fry ... then we'll witness 'Casper slide' like Skateboard Tricks
^^^^
dunno what a "casper slide" is but i`ll take your word for it
this cats sad .. the type who can't Support his wife .. i'm addicted to the rush like i Snort dah Hype!
so watch me Thump this Ferry ... cuz and dah only 'Pump you Carry' IS FOR your BIKE
^^^^
decent punch but generic and horrible for a battle unless the guy is claiming to be some sort of gangster. never heard of him so i dont know haha
lets watch him Choke, FOR cheep thrillS ... but by the end this battle i bet this Joke will be Killed
I may be mistaken ... BUT this whole time i thought 'Ghost writers' were Supposed to be ILL
^^^^
i liked this one. coulda maybe done something better with the ghost writer concept but it defitinitly works
you should only Talk what you know .. thats why i preech about dah Glock and dah scope
or Boxing yah Folks ... cuz you garbage and only 'See Cheers' when Washing yah cloths (cheer is a detergent for your Laundery)
^^^^
i swear you must put the word glock in every verse you write lol. easy to rhyme with i guess. never heard of the cheer detergent but again i`ll take your word for it
Quix a Monster .... Casper wants us tah think he gangsta and his G's are wid-him,
your prolly terrified standing there 'shaking in yah shoes' like a Siesure Victim
^^^^
nah
overall an average verse but the guy was probably wack and you half assed it. some more nameplay or personals would have been better
Re: Verse for Casper
Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 12:36 pm
by NoVeL
Quix Watch When You Accept Shit From New Comers & Type Ya Shit. I Think Niggas Be Biting Ya Lyrics & Taking em To Use At Another Site
Re: Verse for Casper
Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 12:44 pm
by FlipSide
Hmmmmm No Good If Creative Seen SomeShit Like That.... But It Was A Dope Verse...Fun Read... Dude Just Tried Battling The Whole Sight N Went Ghost
Re: Verse for Casper
Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 6:12 am
by complexity
Quix wrote:he no showed ... so heres mah verse!
check .. i'll post soon
look theres no Escaping Quix, you only hear ohhhhhhhhhhhh shit...if we Rate your diss
watch ... This cat will Fry ... then we'll witness 'Casper slide' like Skateboard Tricks
[Pretty sick]
this cats sad .. the type who can't Support his wife .. i'm addicted to the rush like i Snort dah Hype!
so watch me Thump this Ferry ... cuz and dah only 'Pump you Carry' IS FOR your BIKE
lets watch him Choke, FOR cheep thrillS ... but by the end this battle i bet this Joke will be Killed
I may be mistaken ... BUT this whole time i thought 'Ghost writers' were Supposed to be ILL
[I don't see anything wrong with this line]
you should only Talk what you know .. thats why i preech about dah Glock and dah scope
or Boxing yah Folks ... cuz you garbage and only 'See Cheers' when Washing yah cloths (cheer is a detergent for your Laundery)
[stupid]
Quix a Monster .... Casper wants us tah think he gangsta and his G's are wid-him,
your prolly terrified standing there 'shaking in yah shoes' like a Siesure Victim
[Played]
Nothing horrible besides maybe that second to last bar. I wouldn't add this one to your resume, but it probably would have done the job.