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here ya go guys.

http://www.www.illestlyrics.com/copyrig ... 652526454/

lol dam went hard on Dudes With this... lotta good lines in there... good quality ...funny as fuck..dope beat to spit too as well

this was nice the flow was good a lil off line places but i liked it all good, the punches were pretty dope "Sensible....Sense The Bull" i liked that shit funny too you got this shit down man, loved it keep this shit comin i look forward to doin a track with you

This was good. Quality was very good. Dayum tho! Haha. If THIS doesnt make sum 1 jump on the mic and reply, i dont kno what will. I dont kno what provoked this but im not really trippin cus the shit was laughs. The intros to each verse we ok. Your flow seemed like you forced sum lines here and there but ehhh, rebounded nicely. Your delivery is nice bro. Maybe you can add some ad libs to your verse. Theres alotta spaces between lyrics where u can add some shit to bring out the verse more. I aint really heard alotta ur shit but this is good man. Nice direct diss. Aint no wonderin who it was aimin for. Kool shit dawg

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Maybe you can add some ad libs to your verse. Theres alotta spaces between lyrics where u can add some shit to bring out the verse more.

Good advice From a More Consistent cat

Hilariously Funny Shit Bro... You Made My Day. Fuck Text Battles I'm Bout Ta Go To War in Audio.

the beat was too loud IMO, it was hard to understand ur lyrics..

i like that mystery fan line towards rugged lol... that was funny, the rest was so-so, the rhymescheme and flow kinda got sketchy towards the ending and scattered in a few other places, overall this was decent, i hate downloading shit though, it'd be nicer if you could upload a player from soundclick or somethin

Koms - It should start streaming automatically.

I'm cool with the Ruck but the opener had me laughing.

The whole track was good with consistency. I like to see these kinds of things and comparing this to the last audio I heard from you, you're leagues ahead of where you were previously.

You've never been a stranger to have a bullseye on your back and I haven't seen you slow up yet, so keep droppin shit like this.

Evolution wrote:i like that mystery fan line towards rugged lol... that was funny, the rest was so-so, the rhymescheme and flow kinda got sketchy towards the ending and scattered in a few other places, overall this was decent, i hate downloading shit though, it'd be nicer if you could upload a player from soundclick or somethin

Hey moron. How about just upload the song on here!

lmfao! this shit was terrible son

lol who is this guy ^

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i cant see or hear anything..