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Flip
The Road Been Long, Now i Cruise The Coast
Loose N Ghost, Excuse The Boast Im Moving Strong
Been Proven Wrong, But It Dont Mean Im Loosing Ground
Im Pushing Pounds, Free Lift Free's, My Fittness Grown
Sit On A Gifted Throne, Slit Wristed Dipped This Chrome
I Chief The Smoke, And Breathe My Status Quo
Or-Lean On Tron, And Seige This Massive Flow
Making Caskets Close, In Teams With No Hospitals
Spit Hot Coals, Ta Grill The Beef Then Walk One Em
Cuz I Eat Mcs Like This A Bar b Que In Hawaiis Coast
The Wise Eyes Closed, N Left Exposed In A Concious Pose
A Less Enclosed View Of The Obstacles Blessed Aclove
As Far As Objects Go, Im Worth My Weight In Gold
Push Faith In The Hole, Moves Like Dude's Made Ta Blow
Hold The K With The H Before, Armed N Made For War
Hold A Wake Im Bored, Ill Aim N Bore At Da Jungle Floor
A Special Force, I Stay Fly Kick Rhymes On Delta Boards
Melt The Jack This Mic Supports, Wit Raps Too Hot For Words
N Smoke The Herbs That Lack A Voice In They Deaf Ass Verse

Hook
The Road Been Long, Now i Cruise The Coast
Loose N Ghost, Excuse The Boast Im Moving Strong
Been Proven Wrong, But It Dont Mean Im Loosing Ground
Im Pushing Pounds, Free Lift Free's, My Fittness Grown

Mutual
I Put my Heart Into Lyrics To Fight Of The Darkest Of Spirits
Armed With A Mosh Pit Of Coffins With A Spark So You Fear It
Honouring Often Into Unfurled Extortions
Out Of Preportion Orphans Glancing At The World With Caution
Morphing An Auction Contortians Until You Finally Ignore'em
And Bore'em With The Plex Of Sixteen Inept Precautions
Flashier Than A Gordon Another Star Thats Too Many
Dudes Semi Payin Attention But You Gave Me Ya Two Pennies
Fiending Never Lose Any Timed Shows The Shrine Grows
Designed To Remind With Shine Of A Kind Of Sublime Flows
Get Ya Mind Blown Brainier Than Cobains Back Wall
Stand Tall Fights On Fights Like Stacked Brawls
You Got Guts Big Buts Like J-Lo Fight For Ya Mind
Writing The Rhymes Lyrics So Fire Igniting My Lines
Spiteful At Times Handing Out Shit But Whither Away
Dare You To Get Cocky With My Fist In Your Face
Convicted With Style Wisdom I Sob And Throw My Notes Away
Rob A Feeling Revealing A Conscience With My Hopes Displayed
Not The Type To Envision A Fight Within My Rights Of Decision
Writing Delights With Such A Fright Of Insightful Collisions
So This Is It Armageddon Into Heaven No More Shit
Cause Hell Unleashes When Ever M's On The Track With Flip

And We Out

flip! your flows is really smoothing out man.
a clipped a couple times, but over all level was solid
chorus seemed very rushed and needs 2 be re worded alittle


Mutual's verse has 2 go down alot needs to blend with flips and the beat also had a muffled sound,what type of mic u using? maybe alitte to close 2 the mic
flow was smooth thou


overall alittle tweaking and this would be very sweet

keep building homies

Yea i heaed this shit las night man. Ive never heard mutual but i was very impressed. The vocals should of been blended to match a bit more. Mutuals had like alotta flange or reverb i think. Lyrics were dope tho. Alotta stuff seemed forced at times. Maybe cut off a couple words so it can flow easier. Flip u always improvin dawg no doub bout that. And for mutual, i hope to hear more of what u got dawg. Couple minor flaws but its progression. Keep at it fellas

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Thanks Bro... I Think Now That I Hear It i Forced A Lot Of Shit... I bet If I Give It Another Take Today Id Kill It Tho... Maybe I Should Start Dropping The Same Verse Like Three Days in A Row And Then Just Pick. See If It Sounds Better Day After Day...As For Mutuals Verse... I Think He Got Skillz ...Lol ... The Hook Needs Work Tho... Its Off Beat ...But Ehhhh Time Is An Issue For Us So... This What He Diddid

thanks for all the feed much apprecciated and yes AbZ i think i was too close to the mic but glad on the feed will be returned

lmao wtf your accent is horrible son


you kats were talkin mad shit last night like yall was them dudes on the mic


lmfao fuck outta here

damn i never even seen this, i was about to use this beat too, fags..ruined the beat....if it wasn't for that i'd leave better feed...assholes lol

I have to admit this was not Too Good on my part... i also have to admit the noble one is the equivalent to a gallon of douche juice... a washed up pussy

what th hell is Nobles problem? and i havent said any shit lol about being great on the mic? what!!

thanks for the feed man, yeah damm accent most people dont like, but yeah i mixed this again and did it better so Flip will have to put that up at some point cause his verse is alot better, thanks for the feed though

Ill Do That When Ever The World Stops Spinning As Fast As A B-Ball On A Globetrotters Finger...Thanks For The Feed Zzir

You got this song uploaded anywhere else? I'd like to take a listen to it, but wherever it is uploaded to is a blocked website in China. In fact, Flip, I've only ever been able to hear one thing from you because all your uploads are always on a site I'm blocked from. Soundclick, myspace, facebook = blocked

I Think Mutual Could Load up A Different WebSite. Unfortunately i have not had time for anything other than work lately.. Hopefully things slow back down and i could jump back on this. Mutual if u have the other copy can u upload it with another site?

Man You Could Simply Just Upload It To The Site?

This is a nice collab fellas. Flip, I like your verse a lot, the only part where the flow seemed to fall was the BBQ thing, didn't seem to fit in right. Otherwise the flow was consistent, the lyrics were nice. Solid verse. The hook is fine, but doesn't really seem like a hook, seems more like just the end of your verse. And the second recording of the hook sounds strange. Mutual, u gotta nice flow too, a bit more breath control at certain points would make it better. I dig the accent, I'm always tryin' to find hip-hop from diff parts of the globe, and whenever i hear some nice flows with an accent i don't often hear in the hip-hop world, i think its dope. Your flow could be improved if u had a bit more emotion behind it, something to pump up the energy more. But on both of your verses, the consistent internal rhyme scheme and similar paced flows makes this a real nice collab... Hope to hear more from the both of you (but not from soundclick