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Didnt know I need to tell the clues ,Ignorant call by me to think what we held was true
God damned the truth the way that he damaged you, feel destined to win but manage to lose.
So I've taken my life and forsaken this knife, so I no longer awaken at night
Screaming in the dark, quakin in fright, demons surround me, Im achin for light
Been thru flame engraved walls, where angels fall, tried to leave hell with quickness
I've heard the enraged calls in enslaved halls, but its heaven Ive yet to witness
I wanted to flee but knew I could not, the fire is beautiful and begins entressling me
In fire I should rot, so I wander through wire, looking for a place to rest in peace.
Walked through limbo, refrained from lust, once a glutton but in my brain I trust
I didnt need greed, retrained my wrath, deeper down paths, the rain is now dust
The 6th circle Im raised on alert with my face in dirt, faith is gone but atoned to see
The 7th Im crazed, maimed, n ready for hurt, this violent place is like a home to me
Anger becomes glee, I drop to my knees, now dying in silence, my hearts lowly yearns
Cant be heard or turned to sanity, because I'm lying in violence, my flesh slowly burns

So I've taken my life and forsaken this knife, so I no longer awaken at night
Screaming in the dark, quakin in fright, demons surround me, Im achin for light
Been thru flame engraved walls, where angels fall, tried to leave hell with quickness
I've heard the enraged calls in enslaved halls, but its heaven Ive yet to witness

very dope
some nice imagery in there, flow was solid..
good shit

man yer sig makes me wanna go chew some tabaccy

This was pretty sick Alpha
I'm diggin' the style in this
the imagery was on point, your multi's were cool
the vibe you gave off was dark, but still nice
I think the standout here is the imagery tho'
got a music video or...more movie-esque vibe
nice work tho' my dude, you got some skills
shaking the rust off yet, can't wait to see more
peace!!!!

So I've taken my life and forsaken this knife, so I no longer awaken at night
Screaming in the dark, quakin in fright, demons surround me, Im achin for light

i dunno just flows well to me here... first bar set this one up nicely

Been thru flame engraved walls, where angels fall, tried to leave hell with quickness
I've heard the enraged calls in enslaved halls, but its heaven Ive yet to witness

Great Flow Here Too...Gansta Imagery Here...This Bar Hits With Message n Structure

Walked through limbo, refrained from lust, once a glutton but in my brain I trust

Nice

The 6th circle Im raised on alert with my face in dirt, faith is gone but atoned to see
The 7th Im crazed, maimed, n ready for hurt, this violent place is like a home to me

This Is My Fav Bar here... Dope Piece With Bangin Imagery Bro... Good Read