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Catch you ass hurt? Why you acting funny?
I'm sorry I don't laugh with tards I clap at dummies.
You got gwop? Shaking a can the only time you catching money

lmao

Ya bitch sucked my dick tell me how my nut taste!

hahA
DAMN

You can be mad, J don't care I don't give a fuck hate.
But I'll make sure I load and bust in ya sluts face!

POOR GIRL SHE GETTING MISTREATED lol

solid attack funny as helll


give it a listen

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/love- ... 18017.html

Ohhhh shit...lulz!!!!!!!!!

this was purdy good for a 5 minute key
I lol'd for the most part, some lines were eh
but at the same time they were funny lol
I think Catch need to answer back now tho'

Look homes you're just a nit wit but, me? I'm sick prick.
I'll leave ya eyes black like you rockin patches slick rick!
I cruise in a sick whip with thick chips I'm sick bitch
I quit arguing with ladies so throw on ya lip stick
I aint even trying to start bustin the cold chrome
You're the only nigga that jerks on the phone and busts in his own home!
You could get fucked by ya own clones and butt raped
You want war? Trust me homes I got more than enough truck space.

^^^^^^^^that whole section was purdy funny
like I said man purdy good for being how quick it came together
really went off on dude tho'...when did this all happen?

love it man nice flow funny as

All the rumors around I can't get enough hate
I flip razors and raise bums every time I cut eights.
You can be mad, J don't care I don't give a fuck hate.
But I'll make sure I load and bust in ya sluts face!

LMFAO That Nigga Gonna Be Mad At Chu For A While..

Catch you ass hurt? Why you acting funny?
I'm sorry I don't laugh with tards I clap at dummies.

lol fuck the word tards j.

You got gwop? Shaking a can the only time you catching money
He's really upset about the way I catch his hunnie!

LoL, bum with can.

You'll never touch weight so listen fuck face
Ya bitch sucked my dick tell me how my nut taste!

lmao grimey

Breathe easy little nigga your time is up!
I'll burry ya on the corners but the coroner wont find you fuck!

One of the duller lines,

It's known that I get the cash the wrist'll flash
It's far from a myth that every bar you spit is trash

good bar, should take out the "that" in the Second line.

Even niggas in your crew know that your shit is ass
And you're a faggot quit writin with ya Cicero bitten stash

lmao

This cat has spit his whole life as a ghost trying to ghost write
My flow tight so it's breathe easy nigga I squeeze easy triggas

LoL ghost trying to ghost write.

Be easy nigga we always going heavy in the tri state
This guys fake he's the only bitch on myspace I know with no friends in his top eight!

LoL a little less relevant cause myspace ain't popping

Look homes you're just a nit wit but, me? I'm sick prick.
I'll leave ya eyes black like you rockin patches slick rick!

lol played but used in a good manor

I cruise in a sick whip with thick chips I'm sick bitch
I quit arguing with ladies so throw on ya lip stick

LoL u keep going for his neck

I aint even trying to start bustin the cold chrome
You're the only nigga that jerks on the phone and busts in his own home!

lmao this is just insulting

You could get fucked by ya own clones and butt raped
You want war? Trust me homes I got more than enough truck space.

Grimey, tough

All the rumors around I can't get enough hate
I flip razors and raise bums every time I cut eights.

nice

You can be mad, J don't care I don't give a fuck hate.
But I'll make sure I load and bust in ya sluts face!

LoL.

you came swinging, some lines weren't necessary but it was a good amount of writing You came correct still, Keep dropping fam

Dam son' 5 minutes lyk that
werd up

with all do respect, but am i the only one who thought this was weak as fuck?

no hate n shit, ur my boy yez, but damn, this lacked punches in almost every line... i know u can diss better than that

ScottJames wrote:with all do respect, but am i the only one who thought this was weak as fuck?

no hate n shit, ur my boy yez, but damn, this lacked punches in almost every line... i know u can diss better than that

I agree completely.

You had some really nice lines and a few well worded punches, but overall this was a ton of filler with little sting.

I know you can do better, and you know you can do better than that.

For this being a 5 minute key, it's alright. If you do plan on battling him though you're going to have to come more correct with more thought out punchlines.

Before anyone gets too critical. Remember this was literally a freestyle and I've seen some of you spit in the shoutbox, you couldn't do better.

Yezzir wrote:I type 120 wpm.

^^For some reason, I found that funny....

with all Due Disrespect, why do people say shit like " yeah, I coulda wrote a better verse, but he's garbage so I wrote a quick mediocre verse."...

Basically telling everyone to " go take some time & read my mediocre verse".....

I won't breakdown the verse...all I'll say is that nothing in there was clever.....*end*

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crimson wrote:with all Due Disrespect, why do people say shit like " yeah, I coulda wrote a better verse, but he's garbage so I wrote a quick mediocre verse."...

Basically telling everyone to " go take some time & read my mediocre verse".....

I think all that matters is that Catch read it.

i dont think it matters at all... the point was to say .....Look im better than u and im half assing it .... and as for the verse.. i have to admit it wasnt the best but it shure did do what he intended it to do...ridicule the opponent...im shure if this was a battle it would have been a different story... i think...hmmmm I Think im on the fence here... U Set the Stage Zzir... Lets See Him Respond in fashion... id like to see a hyped up battle...A la Tony Vz Coture