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heres a different side of abz its a rough draft
and unfinished still need 2 re-work the hook lol

Your flow is great as always but not sure your voice works as well for this type of song. You still got that aggressive spit. Good shit, though.

It Was Nice But You Gotta Tone it Down A Lil Bit. You Sound Excited Like Your Naturally High & It Don't Carry Well With The Beat. Don't Get Me Wrong That's Great But Not For A Song Like This.

yeah i know, my wife told me the same thing,she said" sounds like at any moment u can snap and talk about killing me"

yeah she was begging me for a track about her..knowing its hard for me to tone it down...i'm naturally intense thnx for the listen

Yo AbZ, noticed I never did comment on this one after I first listened to it. I like your style man, your writing ability is real strong and you gotta real unique flow. As others have said, the intensity of your style doesn't quite match up with a love song, but I like this song nonetheless. The beat you use here matches the theme to perfection. If you get a chance to upload some of your other stuff into these forums (not through soundclick, myspace, or facebook) please do, I wanna take a listen to more of your shit but can't on the sites you've uploaded most of what you have up in here.

viral already used this beat back when he was with his girl, his version was definitely better imo lol, im kinda annoyed with this beat though, it gets old quick, not feelin the vocals at all, second verse sounded like somethin from sesame street, i dunno lol it made me laugh, keep droppin though...this was definitely not a shadowville beat that would ever cross my radar

Yeah man.. the beat kinda killed what u brought.. it just like Evolution said got old.. and i wasnt feeling the hook.. but u bring that "style/sound" that is unique.. the vocals i like.. u can write real well also... imma peep more of ur stuff out.. good overall track

I liked your other style more than this but it's good to mix it up every once in awhile. You had some real nice lyrics in this one though. Good job.