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Living Wit Corrupt Minds They Say The Worlds Blind Trying To Find Time
Muggins Poverty Lets Rewind Look Back In Time See What We Can Find
Streets Be Calm Trying To Reclaim And Replay Things Of The Old Ages
Turning The Pages Watching As The Images Surpass They Slowly Fading
Discriminatin The Beings Our Fathers Are The Ones That We Hating
Now The Times Are Changeing Realiseing Our Mistakes We Learn To Forgive Them
Try To Forget But Memories Never Fade We Always Seem To Replay Them
Recognising The Signs Trying To Find The Old Times Deepest Moments Of Our Lives
Still Mankind Stopping The Feelings Trying To Reel In The Same Of Our Kind
Hopping Over Enemy Lines Trying To Stop The Enemy Fire Gettin Tired
Now Its Time To Retire Old Vets Starting To Retire Militants Kinds Full Of Liers

Yeah Why Not...You Wanna Set It Up?

Streets Be Calm Trying To Reclaim And Replay Things Of The Old Ages
Turning The Pages Watching As The Images Surpass They Slowly Fading

Try To Forget But Memories Never Fade We Always Seem To Replay Them

DOPE

solid verse good content

I enjoyed this, the vocab was cool, some words didn't fit
but the vibe was there, I think it's how you tried to keep it even
like let every line follow the other, it's a good idea to do
but some words really didn't need to go in there in my opinion
it's a dope piece nonetheless, I see potential in you tho' man
just keep writing and dropping some new stuff and you'll be up there
peace.........................................mu'fucka

Very nice. Has a smooth rhyme scheme.

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