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Intro: Lemme Take That Red Pill, (Gulps).. 1.. 2.. 3...

He Slips into A coma, Fresh Scents & Thee Aroma
There's Life in These Flowers So How Can Death Be His Cohort?
Strolling Through Placid Gardens, Experts Say They Know em'
A Veteran of Time Even "New Kids" Had 2 Grow Up
The Weight is Heavy on His Shoulders 4 Burdens Had 2 Blow Up
But These Thoughts Sicken Me So Much That I Wanna Throw Up
But I Can't So I Stomach It, Running Quick, Anxiety..
Palms Sweaty As The Grade Triples Siamese
Knock-Kneed Limbs Betray Me As I Start Staggering
Hunger Pains Inadequate
I Sit Down in Slight Fatigue
No Response, Shuddering My Eyes Pop & Start Bubbling
What's Going On With Me? Pretty Soon I Start Wondering
This Fantasy of Life Can Be The Cause.. So Troubling
I Receive in Thee Applause As The Sequel Exceeds The Raw
Pool Sharks & Rubber Tubes, I Perceive The Sea As Jaws
Relief? Only If You Conceive It's Preadorn
Greece Or Am I Speaking Greek?
Wat U Believe 2 Be Mythology is Unicorns
A Simple Dress Attire in Uniform You've Expired On The Analog
I Perspire When I Expel-A-Force, Piss Fire On A Planted Bog
When Conspired Lies Seep Down Chimneys Like Santa Clause
Brutality! When You Find Your Fixed Reality

first let me say your Avy is funny as hell. i couldnt read the first few bars because it kept getting my attention lol.

But I Can't So I Stomach It, Running Quick, Anxiety..
Palms Sweaty As The Grade Triples Siamese

I Receive in Thee Applause As The Sequel Exceeds The Raw
Pool Sharks & Rubber Tubes, I Perceive The Sea As Jaws

i just put the 2 pieces that struck me the hardest
you went on a trip for sure on this one. i am a pretty
big fan of Vocab.and you were Def on it in this drop. i dont have
anything negative to say. i enjoyed the read.

This was pretty dope cre...haven't seen this side of you
really come off more as a text battler that couldn't make it at times
but maybe your true calling is dropping stuff like this
I swear you got the mechanics down which makes for a good read
either way a dope ass drop man....keep writing

Thanks QZ & Vario I Appreciate The Feed.
I've Always Wanted 2 Be A Great Text Battler
But I've Been Holding Out On Stuff Like This For A While.
I'll Make More Since You Like em.

Strolling Through Placid Gardens, Experts Say They Know em'
A Veteran of Time Even "New Kids" Had 2 Grow Up
The Weight is Heavy on His Shoulders 4 Burdens Had 2 Blow Up
But These Thoughts Sicken Me So Much That I Wanna Throw Up

Aint That Some Real Ass Shit Right There

No Response, Shuddering My Eyes Pop & Start Bubbling
What's Going On With Me? Pretty Soon I Start Wondering
This Fantasy of Life Can Be The Cause.. So Troubling
I Receive in Thee Applause As The Sequel Exceeds The Raw

This Is Banging Right Here... Great Imagery

Wow... I Didnt Know U Go Deep On Some Poetry Stuff Bro... Im Impressed...Would Like To See Some More Distilled Drops From U...1