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I'd appreciate it if ya'll could give this song a listen and reply with some feedback. Lyrics and instrumental by me, Intrinsic Cadence.
This is my first upload here in the forums, but I'll be around into the future I'm sure.

Loving the jazz kind of beat. Your voice fits it perfect. Excellent flow. You were able to speed it up and slow it down with out ever really going off beat. I feel like it fell off in two spots but it was 99% perfect. The whole vibe of the song was very chill and inspiring. Good shit.

Im diggin this bro, got that ol skool outkast vibe. But yeah fell off just a little but that was spittin alot of fire

Jazzy feel was dope, you flow was great, turn your vocals up though, it was really hard to hear you.

Thanks for the comments, I appreciate them very much. When I re-record this for the final version, I'll make sure the volume is equal across each verse.

dope..alittle better mixing here and there,. and this a solid track, reminds me of some old school shit older ..love it

yeah like others have said vocals need to be more normalized, beat was dope liked the drums and array of instruments only complaint is the one flute riff is alot louder then the others you should be able to hear which one i'm referring to, liked the switch ups throughout made it interesting to listen to & worked well in contrast to the mellow vibe of the beat

Yea I Think The Mixing Is The Only Thing That Held You Back... Tho I Think Your Delivery Was On Point AnD Im Also Feeling This Beat Bro..I... Toward The End I Think Ur Breath Came Thru Too Much... Like I Can Hear u Takin Them Breaths A Lil More... But Other Than That ... Like The Pace... BEZ

Actually I think that you could clean up your schemes a bit. A lot of extra words were used to make rhymes that would sound much doper if you found better phrasing. At least on this track.

As for the topical, its surely abstract. I enjoyed it a good amount though. You sound a bit like Del tha Funkee Homosapien.

Flow and all that was on point.

I really am a horrible judge of quality. That all seemed good to me.

Nice to see some new talent in the creation chamber.

Thanks all for the useful comments, I got lots to reflect on with this track now when i go into making the final version. All ya all have given something useful...
It's interesting, complex, your comparison to Del is far from the first time that comparison has been said, but I don't really see it. I mean, I love Del, he's one of my all time favs, and I don't mind the comparison at all, but when I listen to myself I don't hear Del.