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Been Debating Weather Loving N Hating Is Of The Same Making
My Heart Is Dictating The Achin Replacing The Positive Feelings
Cognitive Visions Got Me Trippin Decieving My Feelings Connections
To My Reason N Thinkin's Reflection Of What Questions Affection
Lifes An Aventure My Rights Will Be Questioned Like Im Suspected
Never A Lecture In Light Of A Lesson I Never Answer To Nonsence
Impulsive Desicions Can Deepen Insicions Or Finish This Healing
Always Believing That As longs As Im Breathin Im BattlingDemons
So Gather The Heathens Cuz If Its A Matter Of Misery U Look For Me
Ill Be In Hells Belly Killing Beast's With A Reason Like Constantine
Im Constantly In Greed, The Grease That Fluidly RunsThe Machine
Plottin On Snaggin Its Teeth, Where The Gears Turning The Feed
Kinda Like Rolling The Leaf, Overloaded, N Only Smokin The Keef
Stoning The Beat Like Torture A Feeling Ta Me,What Does It Mean
Im Souless Indeed Not A Soul Would Believe This Vessel'ill Speak
But Would Spring To Its Feet With Incredible Speed For His Belief's
Give Me Love Or Death As Longs As I Keep Near Whats Dear To Me
Fear N Hear My Speech Cuz If Ya Here Ur Near & Within My Reach
Step N Breach Ya Integrity Into A Piece In The Puzzle Of My Legacy

Your flow is on some whole other shit
but the piece comes along strong man
the rhyming is kinda off beat but still there
I guess it depends on how you read it
either way the whole vibe you give is nice
the mixture of both aspects comes across diffrent
but still comes off as true, more like preaching
which is dope, like you just bringing the truth with you

Im Constantly In Greed, The Grease That Fluidly RunsThe Machine
Plottin On Snaggin Its Teeth, Where The Gears Turning The Feed
Kinda Like Rolling The Leaf, Overloaded, N Only Smokin The Keef
Stoning The Beat Like Torture A Feeling Ta Me,What Does It Mean
Im Souless Indeed Not A Soul Would Believe This Vessel'ill Speak
But Would Spring To Its Feet With Incredible Speed For His Belief's

that's prolly my favorite part, like you was really getting into it
very sick stuff man, still very nice usage of imagery
came along nicely...keep writing my dude!