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Renegade (Short Demo)

Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:08 am
by young_jobe
[V 1 - Jobe]
Just picture me, the best modern day artist since the generation
Of history? Unless not if they saw this in the liberation
Progress embust stimulation
Filled billions with words of wisdom, quite first attention
Still children been heard and listen, live verse a written
No truth seem elusive, I flourish with it
Most beauty illusion, my words descriptive
Those whom dream of music? Write worthless rhythm
I do share a new rhythm, hyped people just kickin' my songs and
Try to spare good music when I'm speakin' much, isnt spite nonsense?
Light Bearer Lucifer please hail The Prince Of Darkness
Might scare the beautiful, evil of sins regardless
Im praised and humbled, as if Pope Benedict the 16th
Rhymes quake and crumble, thats when Jobe fix to spit somethin' mean
Quickly hidin' from them, run, and get away!
Bitch, see I'm a motherfuckin'-- RENEGADE!

[Chorus]
RENEGADE! Never been afraid to say
what's on my mind at, any given time of day
Cause I'm a RENEGADE! Never been afraid to talk
about anything (ANYTHING) anything (ANYTHING), RENEGADE!

Never been afraid to say
what's on my mind at, any given time of day
Cause I'm a {RENEGADE} Never been afraid to holler
about anything {anything?} Anything {ANYTHING!}

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Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:23 am
by Munteskue_lol
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Re: Renegade (Short Demo)

Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:14 am
by Lawgix
yeah not too sure who he is... but i highly doubt its Deaf Shady he already tried to come back n got called out...

Re: Renegade (Short Demo)

Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:38 am
by young_jobe
Im not deafshady.. for the last time, u incoherent motherfucka.. I have multi's and dat other guy whu u call "deaf" doesnt.. Keep me outta yo bullshit catch22.

Re: Renegade (Short Demo)

Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:14 am
by AbZ The Beast
No truth seem elusive, I flourish with it
Most beauty illusion, my words descriptive
Those whom dream of music? Write worthless rhythm
I do share a new rhythm, hyped people just kickin' my songs and
Try to spare good music when I'm speakin' much, isnt spite nonsense?
solid seg.
Light Bearer Lucifer please hail The Prince Of Darkness
Might scare the beautiful, evil of sins regardless
dope line..

solid verse good flow..no complaints

AbZ

Re: Renegade (Short Demo)

Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:52 am
by young_jobe
Thanxz for the feed back

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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:29 am
by Munteskue_lol
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Re: Renegade (Short Demo)

Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:52 am
by Quix
the best part was the hook .. nough said!