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Just Goin' Off

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PRkejqmC5H0&feature=fvw[/video]

They say the upside to life is when you make it
the vacant spot is yours once you ready to take it
friends surround the banquet your last dinner as a free man
if the love don't kill you, then maybe the disease can
shadow'd by the weekend, the days all mold together
no matter how good it sticks, the glue don't hold forever
you see perspectives moving at a different rate, so do I
the route you take is depending on how you go through life
view the positive, take rap out the box you lost the gift
and if people were so loving why ain't they so prosperous
preposterous, they hit you with that shit that ain't gold
try to show you up, that's flattery when the fan da go
sucks when you can't tango, and you dance with the devil
gotta salute you, death the only time your hands on a medal
raise the bar and cornerstone the game, then price increase
let them break down the clock, cuz all their timings weak
I try to find the time to speak, keep a wide eye to hope
they suck but don't show it, they been so blind to blow
I'm the kind to show you reality, write it all in a pamphlet
but y'all slow to switch gears, when I always been automatic
don't come across as standard, and expect to keep me booked
stripped down the criteria, just so their squad got a easy look
but you know how Eazy looked, death bed dying of AIDS
try to kill Mufasa when you know that all that prides in the way
keep thinkin' they Ray J, Jeannie, wishing in the wine of the vase
bootleg dealers only time they really be cosigning you fakes
they crap, so dice em away, I'm still on my run for the greats
still I feel like I'm robbin' son, I'm up on these boards with Nate
now they wondering where all this hype and the anger's been
must be voyeurs, 99 problems, 100 points, and a chamber lens
so bitch let it go, I'm just freeflowing offa the mediocrity
that's just love dawg, so figure out what it means to Socartes.......


k.....I'm done
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Re: Just Goin' Off

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no matter how good it sticks, the glue don't hold forever
very dope line homie
raise the bar and cornerstone the game, then price increase
let them break down the clock, cuz all their timings weak
dope

overall solid verse man
no gripes keep it up


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Nice piece for just goin off didnt have a point or purpose but that was the point right
overall flow was ok but it had some nice meta lines i liked
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0_0 thanx bro's beers on me......pause
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