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I'll fuckin'..........

Grab a acid tab slap ya back with shards of glass then fill the gash with gas
smash the tab, light a match toss both in then give you daps for that trash
steal ya stack of mags, laugh at your backwards ass for tryna handle shit
don't know jack till the mantles kicked and this jack jumps over the candle stick
stick to a flow why do that? I influence rap and then reduce the cats
you the type to get the flu through crack, fuck grease and seduce the fat
chew it and screw a cat
if I snooze on rap, then I'll wake up a new father of a whole new genre
while you still a virgin, pre-madonna, see a farmer take his pitchfork
I'll split foreheads, find the complexities and detach the veins and vessels
keep thinkin' you insane, professional, I say you a lame on a menstral
snatch a title? why pursue it, I rather pour syrup on a insane instrumental
remove the brain with tissues, dip it in the syrup make sure your brain is nestled
kick a fieldgoal, whoever wields flow could see how the deal goes, for real doe
what's your real goal besides a ill show of you fuckin' yourself with a dildo
I don't need a line broken down to see who iller, it's like saying Young Jobe a true killer
or deafshady writes his own shit, you ain't a writer so your post in this section is true filler
I'll rip your cords from the mic jack send you to heaven and shoot down your flight back
I ain't on the site's sack begging for a cypher in a chatroom that's been quite wack
take another vaca, cuz it'll take you 8 days to write a better diss to send back the same day
you a champion that ain't weighed, gettin' toyed with title fights that seem played, hey hey
if I'm stating the obvious I might aswell initate with the fakest offense
I'll break his arms with a snow flake forest, that's ice shaved with skates, awesomeness
I ain't fuckin' with lamely placed plots and this cotton candy froshmen
pile drive? that's badly broughten, I'm back quicker then Andy Kaufman
talking about replies? funny cuz the site's death might be hard to see it's bright red
it's mostly mic head's and I kept the writtens poppin' off since I always incite breath
I never took the right step cuz I don't like to be viewed as a prized vet
so when I step, my lyrics won't die yet, they'll live in the minds that like depth
explain 20 lines that go shit like I'ma take your kid, shank their ribs, smoke dank and quit
snatch their corn flakes and kick the table over get your sloppy seconds and make your bitch
rich? for gods sake just quit battling is fake is shit this is WWE vs. MMA
my attendance made more quotes then you could on your bestest payday...yea homey I reached
I fuck the loneliest freak who looks like Dhalsim with the boniest feet
she stretchs farther then your lines, and I call that the phoniest feat
homey is weak and I'm like Philonius with sheets stuck in Rome
the fuck? I'm done I'm thrown...........lulz

HA! This was random as hell QZ and I loved it... just my style. Mad rhyme scheme here. I was rolling throughout the verse man.
"you the type to get the flu through crack, fuck grease and seduce the fat
chew it and screw a cat
if I snooze on rap, then I'll wake up a new father of a whole new genre
while you still a virgin, pre-madonna, see a farmer take his pitchfork" LMFAO!


After that you got all serious on me and shit. But that's how I do too.. I might kick some crazy shit in the beginning but get back on the current topic of the forum. I liked it QZ.

I fuck the loneliest freak who looks like Dhalsim with the boniest feet

HAHA!!! good shit playa

overall this was pretty good. some of the lines were a bit off and some didnt rhyme but overall a solid piece. kind of looked a bit rushed compared to some of your other stuff. but word keep doin ya thing man.

nigga its not that ya verse is too long.. But the fact that ya bars are stretched,uneven it doesn't flow is the reason i didnt read the whole thing str8 up EDIT THIS if you want my feed or continue to leave this slopy copy as it is

I won't edit shit...but thanx for the bump patna

I don't need a line broken down to see who iller, it's like saying Young Jobe a true killer
or deafshady writes his own shit, you ain't a writer so your post in this section is true filler


LOL

Overall This was pretty cool I Liked how it went on,
I Take it as a Diss towards Jack If i'm correct...

I Know for a fact you could do better but if this is bait
its still up to standards, either way cool effort.. that

Dildo line sounds familiar by the way.

Return the feed, good shit, keep dropping