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Posted: **Thu Aug 05, 2010 7:15 pm**

No Offence Meant To Anybody On Anything Lol There Was No Topic Is Was Completely Crazy Just Leeting Some Steam Go With Crazy Shit That Makes No Sense Had To get It Up, Flip Was Supposed To Jump On This But For Reasons Of His Own He Didnt, Feed Will Be Returned

You Faggots Aint Ready I'm Comin All Night Like Brothels Ready To Brawl Right?
You'll Fall Shite Grown Tired Of Quix Beef With Hazard Like Constant Small Fights
I'm All Fright You Bitches Aint Gettin It Rap Is a Fad And I'm Glad To Be Back
Stabbing At Rap And You Fucks Will Be Picked On More Than TOYH's Fantasy Drafts
I'm Mad With The Math Adding Your Failures Up To Count Upon My Success
I'll Give You A Porn Star With A Vaccuum And A Tornado Yet They Suck Less
I'm Astounding With Laughs I'm Found In A Flash From Future Lounging With Rap
No Doubting My Path Drowning My Past Fuck Mutual?You Aint Never Pounding This Ass
My Final Course, Entwined With Force Like Dinosaurs Rhymes Fall Short Like
Lines Were Dwarfs,Turn My Back To Make It Easier For You Knife To Find My Spinal Cord
If You Aint Understand These Words I Run The Man To Blurbs Gun In Hand Unheard
Some Just Stand Absurd Whilst I'm Amster Or Hoover, Give A Damn You Herbs
Rhymin Like You 10 Well I Hope Your Older Hurt But Cant Seem To Grope A Shoulder
Cant Cope Like Soldiers But You Only Poppin For 5 Mins Nuccas Like Coca Cola
Interupt My Schemes With Madness I'm Stuck With Dreams With Flustered Steam
Enough It Screams, You Procclaim It A Diamond But Even Dust Will Gleam
I'll Have Eleven Babies Trebled Daily Give God A Marker And Have Heaven Trace Me
Reble Fading, I'll Have A "Show Of Force" To Show "Consenting Adults" I'm Kevin Spacey
Sticky Situation....Get It?.....Tipex Sniffer!!....Faggot Correct Me If I'm Wrong
Played Out? Nah......I'm All Out In The Open Like An Erection In A Thong
I'm Just Havin Fun With It Coming Out With More Bent Views Than Hollaway
Ya Girls Say, Left Legs Easter & Right Is Christmas Meet Me Between Holidays

Posted: **Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:39 am**

You Faggots Aint Ready I'm Comin All Night Like Brothels Ready To Brawl Right?
You'll Fall Shite Grown Tired Of Quix Beef With Hazard Like Constant Small Fights

LOL way to start it off My Dude...

Stabbing At Rap And You Fucks Will Be Picked On More Than TOYH's Fantasy Drafts

Funny Ass line Tho...Good Current Events

I'm Mad With The Math Adding Your Failures Up To Count Upon My Success
I'll Give You A Porn Star With A Vaccuum And A Tornado Yet They Suck Less

This Like A Blind Bolo... It Will Hit Any One That Stands In Front Of It... Second Line Went Hard

Some Just Stand Absurd Whilst I'm Amster Or Hoover, Give A Damn You Herbs

Nice Word play Right Here... Nice

Interupt My Schemes With Madness I'm Stuck With Dreams With Flustered Steam
Enough It Screams, You Procclaim It A Diamond But Even Dust Will Gleam

This Was Def Descently Structured

Sticky Situation....Get It?.....Tipex Sniffer!!....Faggot Correct Me If I'm Wrong
Played Out? Nah......I'm All Out In The Open Like An Erection In A Thong

This Was Dope To Me... Jus They Way I Would Say It Would have People Going Daaaammmm Dudes Crazy lol

Ya Girls Say, Left Legs Easter & Right Is Christmas Meet Me Between Holidays

Funny Last Line Too

This Was A Dope Piece Bro...Even If U say u Were just Fucking Round You Provided A Good Display Of Skill... Nice To See We Got People Dropping To Make Dudes Wanna Up Their Game... I Think The Beggining Hit Hard As Fuck And Toward The Middle U Got A Lil Choppy With Some Bars But Held it Together Mostly Through Out The Whole Verse... Honorable Mention Here

Posted: **Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:53 am**

Thanks For The Feed Flip Definately Preciated!!

Posted: **Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:56 pm**

Good shit all around. I liked the Kevin Spacey line a lot. Last bar was especially dope, too.

Posted: **Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:06 pm**

thanks for the feed man preciated

Posted: **Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:49 am**

thansk for the feed Rugged much props on that will be returned

Posted: **Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:18 am**

- Mutual - wrote:No Offence Meant To Anybody On Anything Lol There Was No Topic Is Was Completely Crazy Just Leeting Some Steam Go With Crazy Shit That Makes No Sense Had To get It Up, Flip Was Supposed To Jump On This But For Reasons Of His Own He Didnt, Feed Will Be Returned

You Faggots Aint Ready I'm Comin All Night Like Brothels Ready To Brawl Right?
You'll Fall Shite Grown Tired Of Quix Beef With Hazard Like Constant Small Fights

Agreed

I'm All Fright You Bitches Aint Gettin It Rap Is a Fad And I'm Glad To Be Back
Stabbing At Rap And You Fucks Will Be Picked On More Than TOYH's Fantasy Drafts

Good punch.

I'm Mad With The Math Adding Your Failures Up To Count Upon My Success
I'll Give You A Porn Star With A Vaccuum And A Tornado Yet They Suck Less

I don't mind this line.

I'm Astounding With Laughs I'm Found In A Flash From Future Lounging With Rap
No Doubting My Path Drowning My Past Fuck Mutual?You Aint Never Pounding This Ass

No Homo.

My Final Course, Entwined With Force Like Dinosaurs Rhymes Fall Short Like
Lines Were Dwarfs,Turn My Back To Make It Easier For You Knife To Find My Spinal Cord
If You Aint Understand These Words I Run The Man To Blurbs Gun In Hand Unheard
Some Just Stand Absurd Whilst I'm Amster Or Hoover, Give A Damn You Herbs

Not a bad play on words, tripped up a bit on the way to it, in my opinion.
Rhymin Like You 10 Well I Hope Your Older Hurt But Cant Seem To Grope A Shoulder
Cant Cope Like Soldiers But You Only Poppin For 5 Mins Nuccas Like Coca Cola

Not a great punch

Interupt My Schemes With Madness I'm Stuck With Dreams With Flustered Steam
Enough It Screams, You Procclaim It A Diamond But Even Dust Will Gleam
I'll Have Eleven Babies Trebled Daily Give God A Marker And Have Heaven Trace Me
Reble Fading, I'll Have A "Show Of Force" To Show "Consenting Adults" I'm Kevin Spacey

Good bar

Sticky Situation....Get It?.....Tipex Sniffer!!....Faggot Correct Me If I'm Wrong
Played Out? Nah......I'm All Out In The Open Like An Erection In A Thong

No Homo again

I'm Just Havin Fun With It Coming Out With More Bent Views Than Hollaway
Ya Girls Say, Left Legs Easter & Right Is Christmas Meet Me Between Holidays

Decent

Overall. Above average punchlines throughout the drop and some good rhyme schemes throughout. I wouldn't say it was a classical piece, but it surely wasn't boring.

Posted: **Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:44 am**

thanks for the feed plex, yeah i knew this wouldnt be classic but i wanted a random piece

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