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Max is 6 bars deadline is 24hrs from this post

I don't like posting so early in a battle but I'll make an exception for you. Hopefully you could make a good come back.......


I could open with an intro. But I'm the main event. Let's began the show than//
(Lawgix) Logical speaking you're whiter than an albino snowman//

Rest In Piece. When I send you six feet deep with your Uncle Jack//
He's an audio producer but still couldn't make a decent track//

Listen to my point. I'll overheat his capability with One Hundred and Seven degrees//
This kid still watches cartoons with all his ability. I'm surprised he even knows his A. B. C.'s//

I'll rip Cary in half like a dry sponge using myspace ammunition//
He finally got a part-time job selling fries as a computer technician//

He's French. He probably sells Missouri mixtapes on the side of his mom's cafe//
wearing his hat low All Day Dreaming About Sex! counting How much he has to pay//

He's got all this mouth but he'll never respond like an autistic simease twin//
He's Dave Chappelle in Africa. I'm Comedy Central asking "Where you been"//

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best 6 bars uve written yet...we'll see wat lawgix has to say

really i thought what he dropped against me was a lot better than this ose but thats my opinion, but this one is tight to im not knockin you homie, keep at it.....

yo this motherfucker is about to be gone yo don't get it wrong bitch your show is over so i'll "bang the gong"

check it

look

my uncle jack was a saint, so i know hes chillin with the angels
but u gotta make a point first, before i ever see ur "points angles"

rest in peace, ha, i'll leave u scattered in peices bitch
the thesis to my "Lawgix" is to shatter ur knees in "6 hits"

hittin below the belt, cause homie, u can't K.O. me inna ring
u STILL wouldn't be champion if ur manager was Don King

keep sayin my real name, man, make my myspace blow up
but u couldn't spew a verse at me if u were "throwin it up"

the reason nobody likes u is cause ur not nice to them
but between u and me, dawg, ur not as "nice as them"

so go ahead, keep talkin "shit" that ur mouth can't cash
until i make ur "crappy" lyrics sound like str8 up ASS!!!!!!

WHAT!!!!!!

bitch death of Lawgix my ass motherfucker

u think u know me but u don't

faggot ass bitch get real

sellin tapes on the side, hahahahaha ur mother sellin porno shit, yeah TELL HER TO GIVE ME BACK MY TWENTY DOLLARS!!!!

fuckin fake ass faggot

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multis - Tie (Neither really used any)
wordplay - Tie (damn yall both makin this hard)
Personal - Lawgix - (he got ona more personal level)
punchlines - Lawgix (thought they hit harder)
flow - Lawgix (it was a easier read for me)
structure - Invince
vocabulary - Tie

So with those votes...
Vote - Lawgix

~GHOST~

1 and uppin thanx for the vote

still uppin... *ahem* wake up!!

Lawgix...Just Hit Alot Harder, Don't Feel Like Breaking It Down...If You Really Want Me To Then Look a Ghost's Post haha anyways...my vote goes to Lawgix

thanx for the vote 2-0 uppin don't really know the max of votes for a win

one more vote for you and its 3-0 which is a KO.

if the next vote goes to invincible lyracist, then it becomes the first person to reach 5 votes who wins

okay, COME ON PEOPLE VOTE!!! lets get this over with

Personal - IL
punchlines - Lawgix
I.L was trying, but his punchlines seemed like they needed to be revised in order to hit
flow - lawgix verse was smoother
structure - I.L
vocabulary - I.L

entertainment - lawgix

overall my vote is Lawgix

I.L was on the right track digging for info, and hes got the concept of making punchlines, he just needs to refine them in order to make them hit in my opinion, over all it was a pretty even battle

*records updated - post closed*