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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M5-KcxN9OvY








Traffic.....I'm stuck in the pacing
facing time as the hands erasing
every moment I'm hating the days
then you walk in, like hey babe...
this is my play pen, where apes n
gorillas are mistaken as street warriors
as you may know there may never be...
order
so as I hand you this divine instrument
but your all into it, create such images
that can change all that your beginning
with
it's a hard life I know, we stuck in traffic
stuck in traffic
the world...
got me stuck in traffic
see the ball keeps rolling and the moments pass
as I'm alone I crash, fall into dreams no seatbelt
I've seen hell from the radio to the open glass
that shattered so fast that it broke like myself
see I fell from the dream, to a accident unpredictable
I'm sick of the bull shit that seems so explicit, full
of regrets and sins that made me seem less sensible
see time sped against me quickly, seemed so incredible
but so inevitble, the crash let to your demise
and time was stuck between my foot and pedal
goodbye....
see I'm stuck in traffic
a million miles per hour
stuck in traffic
speeding to fast
in traffic....
losing it all....
to traffic
now we back to scene one, before you seem done
the dream comes, like I'm grasping a wish here
I could see one, reach to the stars and dismiss fear
I feel so insecure............


I stopped there.....just wanted to know what y'all thought

yo this read good iver the beat more like a spooken word piece pretty simple, flow was on for the most part fell off in places cause of the rhyme scheme

but an enjoyable read good key man