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g/l kidd...

good luck bro... consider this my check in

-- Wed Aug 04, 2010 3:00 pm --

yo

you so skinny u sniff more drugs than ike turner
why ya eyes slanted? i'll nick name you "RICE BURNER"!!!

and i turn up where ever your girl is so when i
see you i'll cut the ribbon so i can unfurl this (middle finger)

oh and ya dope battle closer? hold ya composure cuz
when i was i told i had to battle this POSER the battle was OVER!!!

dude can spit hard but hes gettin KO'd more times in the ring at ballys
bitch i'm the "king" of "queens" you "spade" more fat bitches at ya local rallys

n he couldn't "ace" even the hottest girls if he had to pay
man my joints hittin more "clubs" than a "deck of cards" in play

spittin hard shit i've made damnit i could rhyme for AGES
cuz i got "52" times the rhymes than ya NOTEPAD HAS PAGES!!!

ho bag face it!!! you couldn't "trace this" if u were
sittin in a van actin as an "FBI agent"!!!

this dude has "21" wins but i'ma pull his "card" easily
hes gettin "crapped" on so i'ma get my next win EVENLY

G/L dude...

Yo..

I aint impressed wit Gix, the text he spits reminds me of a 2nd rate Plex, u Bitch
So he tryna take the best from Rip? I'll put Law n Order n not the fake detective shit

I really hate to mess wit Kidd, but he stayin' on my gentitals, he love this flow man
So at a minimal, I punch wit slow hands but it's enough to leave Law School'd like Criminal Justice Programs

I tend to bust & own fam, he blowed, slammed, I want niggas to see I fucked you
you can believe enoughs due, see the pianist Quote and understand why ya Keys Suck Too.....Damn.

I'll leave this punk screwed, get clutched, chewed, Beat Jack? that's somethin' you can't even spell or afford
You can tell that he's tore, Coz who's Above Law? Steven Segal and er'body else on the board

I got this nigga swelled on the floor, you wanna settle the score? not on this site wit weak bars kidd
It's like the beef was part shit, coz the only niggas that know a deal wit Law prolly striked a plea bargain

You don't seem like a hard kidd, you part bitch, tha other half juss tends to act goon
I'll end ya raps soon, coz Law does a show & is the only one there like the Illest Chatroom

Look nigga, don't let me git in a bad mood, or that's you, coz I'm too hot to check ya whack shit
I'll pop & wreck ya tracks quick, coz I heard that Law was on the streets but that's just cops directin' traffic

I aint got a prob deckin' that bitch, it's practice, Jack shits on any kidd ya down with
I come to kick this clown Gix, coz everything you got is Played but the shit on ya soundclick

Fugetaboutit...

haha daaammmmnnnnn i knew it lmao

Wow...........!!!!!!!!!!!

Flow.....Jack
Punches....Jack
...Personals....Jack
Multies...Who Cares

I Dont Think Law Even Tried On This... Everything Was So Damn Elementary In His Verse Compared To Jack... Where I Just Saw Punch After Nameplay After Punch.... Nice Shit....Keep Making It look Ez Dunny

ho bag face it!!! you couldn't "trace this" if u were
sittin in a van actin as an "FBI agent"!!!

Is That A Punch?........ I Dunno

n he couldn't "ace" even the hottest girls if he had to pay
man my joints hittin more "clubs" than a "deck of cards" in play

Wouldve Been Nice If U Used A Jack Card in Play There... Other than That It Missed....

I aint impressed wit Gix, the text he spits reminds me of a 2nd rate Plex, u Bitch
So he tryna take the best from Rip? I'll put Law n Order n not the fake detective shit

that name play hit hard

Look nigga, don't let me git in a bad mood, or that's you, coz I'm too hot to check ya whack shit
I'll pop & wreck ya tracks quick, coz I heard that Law was on the streets but that's just cops directin' traffic

Another Nice NamePlay

U Just Gotta Go With Rippa On This

1-0 jack uppin!

I know I can't vote yet, but I thought I'd drop my 2 cents. Up my post count and get known a bit around here.

What can I say? Jack took it easily. 7 out of 8 bars had hard hitting personals with tight wordplay in all of them.

This line was especially dope, I thought:

Jack Da Rippa wrote: I tend to bust & own fam, he blowed, slammed, I want niggas to see I fucked you
you can believe enoughs due, see the pianist Quote and understand why ya Keys Suck Too.....Damn.

Law almost had something with the Card thing but it didn't quite pan out. Jack had the all around better flow as well.

Multies, Punches, Personals: Jack takes all.

meh 3-0 Jack wins good battle Jack i knew my number was up when u accepted lmao... i just don't battle but still we had a good one... so with that said


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