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Around Rap Was Taught So Early How To Battle Foes
The Battle Froze Watch My Dad, Thats What I Was Always Told
Rapping Cold, But Why Would Idealise An Average Joe
I Said I'll Get Respect From People I Was Sat Below
No Way I Could Let that Shit Go So I Strived For Greatness
Climbed High Jus To Be Pushed Aside But I Thrived On Haters
Who Knew I'd Be Consumed By My Pride Englufed And Swallowed
When I'm Angry I'm Quiet So I Can Sulk In Sorrows
You Alley Cats Follow Style Like There Was No Tomorrow
His Lyrics Were Deep But That Means His Flow Was Hollow
Twisted In Cryptics I Couldn't Let The Urges In
Impersonators Copy, Tryna Mimic A Perfect Thing
No Surplus Wins Can't Find The Path With My Eyes Closed
I'm Afraid Of What I'll See Clouds Cover The Sly Roads
I'm Left Forgotten In The Shadows No Drive To His Flow
Can't Shout, I'm Choking On The Pride In My Throat

Think Then Go....

I'm Used To It Now Relaxed In With The Oldest Lessons
Like Chicken,Step On The Asphault,To Have My Motives Questioned
When I Role In Essence I Sit Back To See It's Forces Out
Let's Applaud With Glee Straight From The Horses Mouth
Step Lightly I Have Certain Pretenses Of Them Winning
But Truth Does Not Depend On A Consensus Of Opinion
Your Finished Like Chefs My Specialities Deliver Spice
I've Made Mistakes But You Can't Step Into The River Twice
I Accept My Defeats Waded In And Rode With Every Bar
Cause, What Deep Wound Has Ever Closed Without A Scar
Think Like A Man Of Action Act Like A Man Of Thought
Afterwards Dispatch Of Words And Correct What The Planet Fought
Never Getting My Words Heard Trapped Under Steeper Ceilings
If Your Searchin Check The Surface In Search Of Deeper Meanings
A Feast Of Dreaming And i'd Rather You Look
Stay Quiet In Symphony A Closed Mouth Gathers No Foot
Complexions Composed In Hope My Message Is Sold
Dont Forget Too Admire The Rainbow As You Look For The Gold
Such Velocity In Anger Opposite Sides Each Lookin Meaner
But Don't Come To Me I'm Damm Sure The Grass Isn't Greener
It's Problems We Can't See You'll Get Annoyed By My Lyrics
But We Only Become Aware Of The Void When We Fill It
If Animosity Develops Like Pictures In A Dark Room
Can It Ruin The Atmosphere Of Peace To A Hard Tune

This Is For My Mixtape I Have Been Writing Alot But I Don't Get Alot Up, All Feed Will Be Returned

No Way I Could Let that Shit Go So I Strived For Greatness
Climbed High Jus To Be Pushed Aside But I Thrived On Haters


liked the way this flowed.

Think Like A Man Of Action Act Like A Man Of Thought

ha. Dope right here.

Either way, dope piece man. A lot of hot quotables in here.

thanks Jack preciated

Word Mutual You Already Know This is Sum DOPE SHIT.. HOTT!!

When I'm Angry I'm Quiet So I Can Sulk In Sorrows
You Alley Cats Follow Style Like There Was No Tomorrow
His Lyrics Were Deep But That Means His Flow Was Hollow
Twisted In Cryptics I Couldn't Let The Urges In
Impersonators Copy, Tryna Mimic A Perfect Thing

This Was Great.. Try Playing With Your Multies And Rhymescheme A Little Bit

Yeah Man I Do Usually Go Over the Top With Multies But On My tape I wanted A Simple Intro To it And This Seemed easy To Do But Thanks For The Feed It Will Be Returned C

thanks TOYH much appreciated

"You Alley Cats Follow Style Like There Was No Tomorrow
His Lyrics Were Deep But That Means His Flow Was Hollow
Twisted In Cryptics I Couldn't Let The Urges In
Impersonators Copy, Tryna Mimic A Perfect Thing"

dope two right here.

thanks for the feed man it will be returned

some straight dope shit right here, props to you man i was surprised by this.

surprised? haha okay no problem man thanks for the feed i'll return asap

- Mutual - wrote:Around Rap Was Taught So Early How To Battle Foes
The Battle Froze Watch My Dad, Thats What I Was Always Told
Rapping Cold, But Why Would Idealise An Average Joe
I Said I'll Get Respect From People I Was Sat Below
No Way I Could Let that Shit Go So I Strived For Greatness
Climbed High Jus To Be Pushed Aside But I Thrived On Haters
Who Knew I'd Be Consumed By My Pride Englufed And Swallowed
When I'm Angry I'm Quiet So I Can Sulk In Sorrows
You Alley Cats Follow Style Like There Was No Tomorrow
His Lyrics Were Deep But That Means His Flow Was Hollow
Twisted In Cryptics I Couldn't Let The Urges In
Impersonators Copy, Tryna Mimic A Perfect Thing
No Surplus Wins Can't Find The Path With My Eyes Closed
I'm Afraid Of What I'll See Clouds Cover The Sly Roads
I'm Left Forgotten In The Shadows No Drive To His Flow
Can't Shout, I'm Choking On The Pride In My Throat

[Very good writing, much more grammatically sound]

Think Then Go....

I'm Used To It Now Relaxed In With The Oldest Lessons
Like Chicken,Step On The Asphault,To Have My Motives Questioned
When I Role In Essence I Sit Back To See It's Forces Out
Let's Applaud With Glee Straight From The Horses Mouth
Step Lightly I Have Certain Pretenses Of Them Winning
But Truth Does Not Depend On A Consensus Of Opinion

[Good point]

Your Finished Like Chefs My Specialities Deliver Spice
I've Made Mistakes But You Can't Step Into The River Twice
I Accept My Defeats Waded In And Rode With Every Bar
Cause, What Deep Wound Has Ever Closed Without A Scar

[More introspection with wisdom]

Think Like A Man Of Action Act Like A Man Of Thought
Afterwards Dispatch Of Words And Correct What The Planet Fought
Never Getting My Words Heard Trapped Under Steeper Ceilings
If Your Searchin Check The Surface In Search Of Deeper Meanings

[Nice]

A Feast Of Dreaming And i'd Rather You Look
Stay Quiet In Symphony A Closed Mouth Gathers No Foot
Complexions Composed In Hope My Message Is Sold
Dont Forget Too Admire The Rainbow As You Look For The Gold
Such Velocity In Anger Opposite Sides Each Lookin Meaner
But Don't Come To Me I'm Damm Sure The Grass Isn't Greener
It's Problems We Can't See You'll Get Annoyed By My Lyrics
But We Only Become Aware Of The Void When We Fill It
If Animosity Develops Like Pictures In A Dark Room
Can It Ruin The Atmosphere Of Peace To A Hard Tune

This Is For My Mixtape I Have Been Writing Alot But I Don't Get Alot Up, All Feed Will Be Returned

Very nice. Lots of quotables and clever tid bits of wisdom laced throughout the drop.

thanks for the feed Plex

Around Rap Was Taught So Early How To Battle Foes
The Battle Froze Watch My Dad, Thats What I Was Always Told
Rapping Cold, But Why Would Idealise An Average Joe
I Said I'll Get Respect From People I Was Sat Below
No Way I Could Let that Shit Go So I Strived For Greatness
Climbed High Jus To Be Pushed Aside But I Thrived On Haters
Who Knew I'd Be Consumed By My Pride Englufed And Swallowed
When I'm Angry I'm Quiet So I Can Sulk In Sorrows
You Alley Cats Follow Style Like There Was No Tomorrow
His Lyrics Were Deep But That Means His Flow Was Hollow
Twisted In Cryptics I Couldn't Let The Urges In
Impersonators Copy, Tryna Mimic A Perfect Thing
No Surplus Wins Can't Find The Path With My Eyes Closed
I'm Afraid Of What I'll See Clouds Cover The Sly Roads
I'm Left Forgotten In The Shadows No Drive To His Flow
Can't Shout, I'm Choking On The Pride In My Throat


Cool Intro, The Flow Was good, you Had some cool Patterns in there, Nothing really grabbed like a "oo' but this Was solid verse;.




I'm Used To It Now Relaxed In With The Oldest Lessons
Like Chicken,Step On The Asphault,To Have My Motives Questioned
When I Role In Essence I Sit Back To See It's Forces Out
Let's Applaud With Glee Straight From The Horses Mouth

Good opener

Step Lightly I Have Certain Pretenses Of Them Winning
But Truth Does Not Depend On A Consensus Of Opinion
Your Finished Like Chefs My Specialities Deliver Spice
I've Made Mistakes But You Can't Step Into The River Twice

Cool.

I Accept My Defeats Waded In And Rode With Every Bar
Cause, What Deep Wound Has Ever Closed Without A Scar
Think Like A Man Of Action Act Like A Man Of Thought
Afterwards Dispatch Of Words And Correct What The Planet Fought

Never Getting My Words Heard Trapped Under Steeper Ceilings
If Your Searchin Check The Surface In Search Of Deeper Meanings
A Feast Of Dreaming And i'd Rather You Look
Stay Quiet In Symphony A Closed Mouth Gathers No Foot

Ok

Complexions Composed In Hope My Message Is Sold
Dont Forget Too Admire The Rainbow As You Look For The Gold

lol

Such Velocity In Anger Opposite Sides Each Lookin Meaner
But Don't Come To Me I'm Damm Sure The Grass Isn't Greener
It's Problems We Can't See You'll Get Annoyed By My Lyrics
But We Only Become Aware Of The Void When We Fill It

k

If Animosity Develops Like Pictures In A Dark Room
Can It Ruin The Atmosphere Of Peace To A Hard Tune

cool.


In my opinion the Strongest Point Was the Middle homie..


Had some stuff in there that you could've tooken out, Like stuff you read and just sounds dull, no sting, Feel me. Other then that. The elevation is coming along good, Keep at it.

much appreciated on the feed Haz