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i accepted and set it up, now i will wait upon your drop!!!

key is at the bottom

Ghost! yourself plus your bars aren't locally vis-a-ble// 1
Its Judgement day, I am lyrically gist-a-ble// 2

He's too short of a cut like when Slimfast dropped Goldberg// 3
Must be on a clear frequency, someone call Whoopie Goldberg// 4

You have offically been cancelled like another Starcraft sequel// 5
I am a lyrical emperor. You and I will never be equal//

I'll treat this stain, then watch his lyrics and his name vanish// 6
Do you understand? look he's puzzled as I verbalize spanish// 7

You can't communicate with The-Witt (Hewitt) even if you were on a Ghost Whisper episode// 8
I revealed your transparent skills without embarking TAPS mode// 9

This is a phenomenon I captured this phantom//
First traveling ghost hitched to a flying Bantam// 10

1-(visible)
2-{constable's(were once judges) + gist (most essential)} = gist-a-ble
3-(Whoopie Goldberg was Slimfast's spokesman but was dropped when she was bashing Geroge Bush)
4-(In the movie Ghost Whoopie talked to a ghost)
5-(Starcraft:Ghost was cancelled)
6-(Vanish is a stain remover)
7- (He so stupid he probably thinks i'm speaking spanish)
8-(Jennifer Love Hewitt talks to ghost but I'm so witty he can't converse with me)
9- (The Atlantic Paranormal Service searchs for ghost)
10-(Bantam flier is a travel tralier)

Ghost I saw you online. Don't come back a few days later and say "oh I forgot." You got until 10:37am tomorrow.

Believe it or not Boy im Destroyin ya Drop Son, when I Deploy and jus Plot Bombs,
Treat ya like the "Spears" baby Boy and jus Drop Son, it'll be quick so no Noise when ya Drop Son//

This wanna be MC who has no flames even when he burns CD's needs to chill and Breathe Easy,
The Beef gets heated and greasy as I eat his lyrics like he's a snack, He Be Cheesy!//

Its a lethal dose of illegal flows, jus truth, grin and bare it youll never See the Ghost,
Couldnt beat a hoe, to defeat a flow, hittin ya wit hollow tips like i keep the Eagle Close//

Look at the Point, Im goin balls out, so this kid jus falls out like its a Foot to the Groin,
Ive Tookin ya Voice, ya manhood as you sound Shook ina Joint, faggot you'll get Put ina Void//

Stick around and you'll Notice, you could hold the mic and puke in ya hand and still Couldnt Flow Sick,
Lay you out like a Futon you jus Fold Quick, couldnt Hold Clips if you held the grip with Both Lips//

Saved the Best for Last:
Ima break ya Invincible Composition, and leave ya In the Cold in Critical Condition, son ya Pitiful Competition, all ya Fictional Writtens Prompted a Diss Hittin ya Divisible Spits Wit Invisible Contridiction, this sick Individuals On a Mission, to top Typical Brittle MCs gettin Belittled in a Quickness/////


Homie, you cant kill somethin thats already Dead........


~GHOST~
aka Spiritual Brutality

Aight Im Done Homie!!!!
But you dont need to get bossy and rush me, Im always gonna post when i say ima post.....



UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!

is it first to 3 votes (any KO's)

I just wanted you to know I saw you online and you knew for sure the deadline. Was that more than 6 bars?

Flow: Ghost
Similies: Invis
Structure: Invis
Multis:Ghost
Punches:Tie
And when the cats fail me I just add in entertainment:
Invis
Vote:Invis


I wasnt gonna vote for anyone cuz it was a close battle and hard to judge because you have different styles and thought i better not bore you to death.. Though ghost you wrote over the limit and your first bar had 3 "drop son"s. . This is definetly not a dickriding vote you're both new comers , good one.

there was no limitations set, how the hell can i go over limit when there isnt a limit, but anyways ima repost this to make it easier to read, cuz it didnt post the way i wanted it to the 1st time

Believe it or not Boy im Destroyin ya Drop Son, when I Deploy and jus Plot Bombs,
Treat ya like the "Spears" baby Boy and jus Drop Son, it'll be quick so no Noise when ya Drop Son//1

This wanna be MC who has no flames even when he burns CD's needs to chill and Breathe Easy,
The Beef gets heated and greasy as I eat his lyrics like he's a snack, He Be Cheesy!// 2

Its a lethal dose of illegal flows, jus truth, grin and bare it youll never See the Ghost,
Couldnt beat a hoe, to defeat a flow, hittin ya wit hollow tips like i keep the Eagle Close// 3

Look at the Point, Im goin balls out, so this kid jus falls out like its a Foot to the Groin,
Ive Tookin ya Voice, ya manhood as you sound Shook ina Joint, faggot you'll get Put ina Void// 4

Stick around and you'll Notice, you could hold the mic and puke in ya hand and still Couldnt Flow Sick,
Lay you out like a Futon you jus Fold Quick, couldnt Hold Clips if you held the grip with Both Lips//5

Saved the Best for Last:
Ima break ya Invincible Composition, and leave ya In the Cold in Critical Condition, son ya Pitiful Competition, all ya Fictional Writtens Prompted a Diss Hittin ya Divisible Spits Wit Invisible Contridiction, this sick Individuals On a Mission, to top Typical Brittle MCs gettin Belittled in a Quickness///// 6


~GHOST~
aka Spititual Brutality

multis - ghost
wordplay - ghost, invincibles were all stretched and didn't really make sense in most cases
punchlines - tie, ghost didn't have too many and invincibles didn't really hit hard.
flow - ghost
structure - invincible
vocabulary - tie

vote - ghost

multis - ghost
wordplay - ghost invincibles didn't make sence
punchlines - ghost
flow - ghost
structure - invincible
vocabulary - ghost

vote=ghost

I aint complaining.....

Votes are 2-1, is it over or does it take 3 votes here as well, not to sure how the votin system is here, anyways thanx for the feedback yall..

UPPIN

~GHOST~

Now its first to 5 stop complaining on how people voted because its not going to change nothing

all i gotta say is shhhhhh with the whinin lyricist

heres my vote

Flow: Ghost
Similies: i'll say Ghost had more i only saw one with lyricist
Multies: gotta go to ghost this killed him
Couldnt beat a hoe, to defeat a flow, hittin ya wit hollow tips like i keep the Eagle Close//
Look at the Point, Im goin balls out, so this kid jus falls out like its a Foot to the Groin,
vocab: Ghost
Structure: Lyricist
Punches: eh i agree with all killah it was a tie but i really think Ghost got it.

over all ghost