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This the first single off my crews new album coming out this year, all beats are original and produced by my boy paktraxx. Enjoy it and bump it leave some feed and i will rtf.

Verse1- YungDosia
Verse2- Shri aka Young Simba
Verse3- KG
Chorus- Lil J

Production- Paktraxx
Beat- Paktraxx

100 % original

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Dope beat lol, although you sound like the traditional southern rapper this was still a dope track. Your lyrics were pretty good, nice rhymes too. Good job.

Im from the west coast my dude. thanks for the love tho fam.

i didnt care for the beat, it was kinda newbie-ish and annoying. u did aight YD, some good lines in there. my fav was KG, although u all kinda sounded similar and all had similar style. not bad though............................................................................

Ite well its #2 in my city right now fam. But all good i know people got diff styles they into. but theres no way either of us flow alike except maybe on the first 4 bars of every verse where it breaks down. But thanks for the feedback and criticism.

I liked It Once The Beat Dropped... Baseline is simple so it allows room to play with..But i See Yall Kept it Similar..Personally I Would Not Be Able To Do That.. Ur Shit Was Tight Tho Exept The Beggining Before The Effects Dropped..Seems It Goes Full Energy When it Does Tho..Good Way To Mix It Up. Hook is Tight... The Other Fellas Were Descent Too.. Nice Lil Play With The Hook After Last Dude Spit....I Like It Over all...Dope Drop My Dude..Been A While Since I Seen U Drop An Audio In Here

honestly i've heard u do better... tbe mix sounded way off to me... might just be me tho... newayz if anybodies verse stood out then it was urs... it was okay but i'm not jumpin out my seat cuz like i said i've heard u do better... lol not hatin just statin

Nothin' 2 Crazy About, Just like Lawgix's Critique I Have Ta Admit The Same. Keep It Triple 100 E-Z

^lol at the worst feedback ever creative . jus playin fam

and word lawgix idk bout the mixing it sounds really clean in a car being bumped or in ya ipod. thanks though!


uppin some more feedback

-- Thu Jul 15, 2010 11:26 am --

And thanks flipside, it has been a minute since i came on here and dropped something.

that beat is sick.

1-5 scales

chorus-4
1st verse-3.5
2nd verse-3
3rd verse-4 nice presence


overall.. good track. quality sounded good..not as good on verse 2. did your think.. Keep bangin'

100

#2 in ya city.. population you and your crew..... #1 justin bieber

SfU battle ducker

Good looks with the feed yall.

and who is this havoc guy roflmao! ive never duckd anyone homey especially you at 4-7 ROFL.

uppin.

I Wanna Go Ta Cali, Where in Cali You Stay At?

roflmao. santa barbara california. Come down here and look me up lol.

Word I Want Summa Dat Cali Cuz, Plus Save Me Summa Dem Big Booty Cali Bitches