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Knowledge defined, pushed into a closet to hide
as I spit topics aligned with the most nauseous of minds
lost in the process of grind, I'm floppin' in time
as the world starts topplin' I find, Colossus the Giant
squeezin' thoughts as a lime, mixtures cross into sight
my sockets can cry, tryna tear up, concepts comply
I release rockets to the sky, split the stars into night
then I pocket the shards, form it into a locket of scars
you call it love I call it a dream, a promise to hearts
that corrupts the honest, the lost, the concepts apart
as the darkness is sparked, new decks, crop up these cards
see I switched em, helped cause this disease to vision
astigmatisms cause the strength perceived as innocence
hopin' these biters would cruise a fix, let me stick to em
a remnant shattered the code, and helped shatter the bones
as their blatters is shown, let the combination scatter the boasts
their flow battles the bowl, as they fall, babel consoled
this is that rattlin' tone, got em like a vandal that's broke
they hittin' air, scandalous throws, save the chatter it's cold
if you wrapped in a evangelist robe, u couldn't preach to god
you couldn't make the wishes that would help you seek the lost
it's like when your peak is dropped you go downhill leavin' it all
your scenic is gone, your one of us, now start concievin' it all

lost in the process of grind, I'm floppin' in time
as the world starts topplin' I find, Colossus the Giant
squeezin' thoughts as a lime, mixtures cross into sight
my sockets can cry, tryna tear up, concepts comply

Flowed Sickly right here

then I pocket the shards, form it into a locket of scars
you call it love I call it a dream, a promise to hearts

Again flowed well and deeply poetic

if you wrapped in a evangelist robe, u couldn't preach to god
you couldn't make the wishes that would help you seek the lost
it's like when your peak is dropped you go downhill leavin' it all
your scenic is gone, your one of us, now start concievin' it all

The syllable count or the way i read it might be off jus a lil but this a a good closer here

It seems that ur flow is becoming seamless my dude and the deep poetic sence to ur drops leads me to believe ur full of shit saying u experiencin a block... GooD ass DroP dude

gracias senor

"a remnant shattered the code, and helped shatter the bones
as their blatters is shown, let the combination scatter the boasts
their flow battles the bowl, as they fall, babel consoled
this is that rattlin' tone, got em like a vandal that's broke
they hittin' air, scandalous throws, save the chatter it's cold"

Your flow and wordplay is nearly perfect here ...
but good job w/ the whole drop in general ...
keep writin