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Nana's been gone but now I'm sad that Papi's missin
I wake in the morning to kiss the pot he lives in

Nice bar

Wish I could talk to the angel of death to gain my respect

Ill

Nice lil quick drop... letting go of the steam well... not too much standing out... but its deep..1

yeah seems a real quick piece man, the flow wasn't bad but as you said it was like a free so it was basic you still did well with the mutlies and it's a good way to vent shit so man for what it is, it wasnt bad keep that shit comin i would apprecciate feed on my drop

nice easy flow, nothin forced, i liked it man
i was gonna quote the "pot he lives in" line then saw buddy up there did it already lol
good shiet dude

its good for a quick verse, its always good to get shit off ya chest. stay up

its short and to the point nice for what it is with the subject it touches on if u feel like it make a verse its real stuff we can relate to and u got the talent id like to see what u come up with but that just me....

Hey you're pretty good, man. I could vibe to that

Always bound to blow up like loaded gauges
It's a matter of time before I explode on pages
I sweat at night with thoughts of the longer days
Never would I think that life belongs this way
Nana's been gone but now I'm sad that Papi's missin
I wake in the morning to kiss the pot he lives in
My heads empty with all my thoughts exposed
Sometimes I almost think I lost my flow
I hear a voice I don't wanna maybe it's the reaper
I climb back in my head but the shit gets deeper
Wish I could talk to the angel of death to gain my respect
I'm always wishin I could get rid of the pain in my chest


Real Solid.. Stitched Together Crazy, different, u utilized a lot of elements in this Lil verse lol


I wake in the morning to kiss the pot he lives in


Liked the line.


good shit, now drop a real verse

feed me i feed you,

i agree with flip side my favorite bar was his first listed
pretty deep for being so short. i liked it tho always good to see personal drops i usually dont post mines but good shit, man i always enjoy reading you steezes keep elevated

This was purdy nice TOYH, the emotion is deep
the words you use were cool, but then again it's a key
either way this was a good drop man, nice lil' drop

The line that really stuck out to me was the pot he lives in. The simplicity probably hurt this piece a bit because it did have emotion.

"My heads empty with all my thoughts exposed
Sometimes I almost think I lost my flow
I hear a voice I don't wanna maybe it's the reaper
I climb back in my head but the shit gets deeper"

I also liked that series of bars.