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i like this dude. YOur voice is deep but it goes well over this beat. did you make the beat? nice work. haha might pack it up and pull a david blaine quick, nice.

K, First N Foremost Lyrics. Granted Ya Quality Is Mad Clear, It Still Makes It Easier For The Listener To Do Quotables And Go Along With What You're Saying. Track Is A Real Good Concept, Cuz We All Hate When A Bitch Try Ta Control, And Personally, I Ca Relate To This Song. Lyrically I Felt It Kinda Lacked, But Different People Have Different Styles So I'm Not Going To Really Go Into Depth Wit That. Flow Was Smooth, On Tha Real, This Sounds Like A Track Game Woulda Done LOL. I Also Felt You Coulda Put Sum More Emotion Into It, U Followed The Same Style And It Kinda Got Old By Mid 2nd Verse. Overall, Solid Track.

ok the hook.. idk if its just me but i just think it needs to go, the 1st intro sounded off beat also.. your voice is good fro the rack.. lyrics kinda mediocre, concept is good and stayed with it the whole time.. your presence and delivery was on point and the quality it top.. over all its good.. i would like to see you do a more up beat track..i think that would be dope

Quality is great man, really crisp. The slow flow goes nice with your voice, you got a bun b thing going on a little bit and I like it. Try and upping the complexity of your lyrics though, use some more multis maybe.