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this is the first verse for the track im working on. once im done the track ill post the audio up.

Beat:
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Verse 1:
fuck the world, is the first thing on my mind
im tired of being pushed around by evil designs
undermined by the problems in life i carry on
with an ignorant hope, for the day ill be strong
with no worries, my thoughts are always in a hurry
and it hurts my soul that im thinking so dirty
livin to be buried in the lies i made you believe
im not that kinda guy, who eases back when he breathes
deep, trackin back to the days of adam and eve
through out history to find a day we were free
only to find out that the temptation to greed
is the foundation of civilization indeed
we were never free, and thats the cold hard truth
as a society we're failing man just look at the youth
instead of pikin up books we use the paper to smoke
the cannabis is a blessin unless you livin a joke
walkin on a tight rope with a blindfold on
so i ask you, which steps are the right and wrong

it was guud.. but u might want change right and wrong to right or wrong.. so it can sound like blindfold on/right or wrong/.. get wut im sayn.. but guud flow

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