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7 bars.
due within 72 hrs of both check ins
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-- 03 Jul 2010 18:25 --

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It's been Months since i had the chance to rip on a fool like this//
cant defend being straight when this fag goes to drool when he kiss//

What the hell is up with the symbols in your name son?//
Unlike your name your simple,it dont help your game none//

I'm Dead,You havn't even developed yet,Still in the womb//
Im past that stage I'm an enveloped threat,destined for doom//

I dont need to know shit to still put an L under your W//
but i do know that the smell of death Troubles You//

Go and take a seat, Don't even post your verse//
its a wasted defeat when I already put you in the hurst//

Looking at The chat seeing you and Mutal Flirtin,HowCute//
I see it in your responses that your hurting, WOW!,FRUIT!//

That last one was intended for your bitch ass,Fuck your Feelings//
Your a window,and i just bend this glass,and caved in his ceilings//


Not explaining Shit. Just think about it.

Peep

I'll Murder This Fag, Pull Up in A Suburban & Laugh
Then Let My Pen Riot & Drag Ya Name in Dirt Till U Gag

God's Given Curse? Dem Frequent Battles D, Musta Left Ya Noodle Split
Crazy Muthafucka I'll Let U Go in Grace & Have U Restin' On Ya Crucifix

Durin' Publicity Stunts, I Ain't The One 2 Go Head & Promote Violence
But If I Muzzle Da Biscuit, Damn Skippy I'll Be Able 2 Dead Silence

Have Yuh Gaspin' Fa Air Like Chest Congested Coughs
Then Sit Back & Hand U A Smokin L* With Reckinall

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/dead- ... 13463.html

Shake My Head & Then Nod, It's Gotta Be Done, Dirty Duties Got Me Hatin' Mah Job
Chrome Piece 2 Ya Dome, Have U Pledge Allegiance Ta Faith, Steady Prayin' Ta GOD

Cannibalistic, Feast On Weaker Prey's Flesh, Check His Bones Rotting in The Sand
Lone Wolf, Prowlin' On Demand, Enter The Stable Barn & Watch Silence of The Lambs

Silouhette Melodies, The Symphonies a Guitar & a Violin
If Words Fall On Dead Ears, I Can Alter The Silence

jiminey christmas!!!!

kay so i don't even have to explain but Creative took the cat sweep...

dead...

ur verse honestly was more of a writers point of view than a direct diss... maybe u should have explained ur verse cuz it would have told the reader what the hell u were talkin about... all those lines were indirect imo... the ONE line i did like was this...

"I dont need to know shit to still put an L under your W//
but i do know that the smell of death Troubles You//"

^^^ line was okay but still weak...

u had so much potential with this and it went no where... but i do give u props for goin against Creative...

Creative...

LMFAO u son'd him haha... i think this was my fav line from ur verse...

"Durin' Publicity Stunts, I Ain't The One 2 Go Head & Promote Violence
But If I Muzzle Da Biscuit, Damn Skippy I'll Be Able 2 Dead Silence"

the rest of ur verse was fire too...

so no hate to Dead but my vote goes to Creative...

so 1-0 Creative Uppin lets get some more votes!!!!

bother verses were rather weak considering the amounts of nameplay you each could have used...however Creative took this in every cat...

ur punches were WAY too soft, silence...ive seen u come harder than this..

v/creative

r u fucking kiddin me? only two votes so far?!?!?!? UPPIN!!!!!

v/ Cre@t!ve


Cat sweep.i agree that both verses weak. but Cre@t!ve had more direct punches and was more Cre@t!ve with his wordplay. Dead your bars just didnt have the impact that was intended.