Hip Hop Forum

Born in the 80's recession crack baby boom white line conception
became a young man in the new millenium depression
plastic food stamps,divine intervention
a stimulus, stimulate chips by flipping bricks
sattelites watch our lives like flicks
doctors implant micro-chips
when i get home is that light gon switch
so i can find a pen to write these scrips
like a pharmacy technician, as hard as me you only wishing
living in poverty pots to piss in that water dripped in
a s*tty position like a pakistani prison rats nibbling on my
toes but i'm still living.

calm down young jeezy
Jay said we off that, be easy
the concepts been done, nice job
got your girl throwin' up balls, like lobs
I don't know thats just a added punch
I'ma rap in here since you rap'd in my stuff
so hows it goin' whats up homey g?
you mad cuz I got your girl whip'd like a lonely freak?
we on to the next one, on to the next one
buildin' a lego city the only time you throw a set up
so be easy friend and hopefully it don't happen again
cuz if it does I'll execute you for a rappin' offense!

i don't know is about the it of it for you, nice 80's rhymes. again n offense don't rhyme buddy.I don't think jeezy's rhymes r similar 2 mine, though it might have a similar title.

you think you got this game sew'd i rip the seems indeed i got gleam tranqulize pussy cats like you like bumps of ketamine, i will put you in the disposal like a old batch of collard greens and ampatate your limbs like they were infected with gangrene.

slow down fat joe.......peep my work
atleast before you go on the fast road

I don't know what the hell you two are talking about. I thought the dudes rhyme was solid though.

i just started getting the freshman treatment for joining the site, posted a cpl ryhmes and defended myself.it's cool though it's squashed.

I thought it was rather basic, but I've def seen worse. Lotta potential though. Keep it up homeslice.