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This is going to be recorded for a track featuring my entire record label, back to back, with no hooks. It will be on the horrorcore mixtape volume three and E2DaP Sampler 2010. If you wanna check out the first two recorded E2DaP Spits, check out www.myspace.com/e2daprecords

Still not 100% done, but im done writing for now...Its to the "4th chamber" by gza.

"My chambers been aborted
warped and violently contorted/
afford it, if you can
lifes a bitch wit a price/
that'll fuck you in all holes
without thinkin it twice/
thru, unscrewin ya life loose
an might choose too/ 4
do ya dirty an spiteful
turn myself into a weapon/
my tongue, is the rifle
pumping venomous rounds/

slammed diseasing the world
spread the toxins in my veins/
to ya 12 year old girls
an little boys get it too/ 8
cuz im a sick, psycho, fuck!
that pedobears approved/
DONT FUCK WIT ME DUDE
im vile wild and rude/
I USE YA BODY FOR FOOD
dont get it twiztid neither/
cuz im robbin you too
(CHEAH) buck booty naked/ 12
as i howl at the moon
(AAAHOOOOOO)
but i aint really nude/
see the fangs that ive sprouted?
ya they turned into roots!/
wrapped my body wit thorns
placed a crown on my head/
discretely held on wit horns

film the creep kinda porn/ 16

got her barfin on my dick
upchucking ya norms/
cuz i MAX THE HARDCORE
wit these RAPS AND FAR MORE/
livin life on the edge
spit the death of darfour/
possessed unlawful
here to test ya jaw for/
weakness in the frame
but i cracked it south paw/

attackin you, an clappin dudes
to show you how the mack can do/
fightin you, an strikin too
to show you what a titan do/

THINK IM RESRTRAINED?
ima beast im bitin through/
my own limbs wit a madness
im an animal savage/
here to beat you to death
wit my leg like im rabid"

Wo0o00o0

This was purdy cool man, you just need to write some mo'
I think the beat fits nicely, i guess it depends on your flow
maybe how you enunciate words needs some work? I don't know
either way a strong first piece, written oddly but it goes....
to work in a certain way, keep writing man, now....I'ma go


cool shit

Thanks!!
Recorded last night, ill post the finished product up when its done

THINK IM RESRTRAINED?
ima beast im bitin through/
my own limbs wit a madness
im an animal savage/
here to beat you to death
wit my leg like im rabid"

lol i think it was cool dude.... but its a lil too crazy n off da wall for me u dig?..... but nonetheless it made me laugh...i just dunno maybe i got to listen to it to see whats good....so post it up

Cheers guys!
Haha I def dig flip side, I'm too "crazy and off the wall" to play certain venues lol thanks for checking and I'll host the audio in a bit when im off work.
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-- Sat Aug 13, 2011 4:44 pm --

Recorded track up @ http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/spitt ... 23562.html

lifes a bitch wit a price/
that'll fuck you in all holes
without thinkin it twice ,
i agree with you on that , and this was a good read.

Thank you sir.

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yo man, this is really good. I liked the flow, you had some good lines in it. Just make it more complex and maybe try adding multis, you should've wrote more in my opinion
All in All good shit, keep it up..peace

Cheers to that sir! Did u hear it also or just read it??
Thanks for the feedback fa sho

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