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7 Bars
House Rules

Punches
Multies
Personals
Wordplay/Nameplay
Flow
Structure

Due 48 hours from check in

Good luck

Checking in and may the best man win. PS thanks for the challenge

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-- Wed Jun 23, 2010 5:41 pm --

Thanks for the rush dumb fuck let's hurry this up, you sarah paylon mother fucker, from the start you were done/
Your just a shit talker, guy stalker, let me lend a strong arm, I'm like the hurt locker, cause I'm disarming your bombs/
You hold the mic like a dick, please there no sucking it, you want to rep the underground? I'll put you there quick/
You must be dreaming thinking your raps could get you paid, "please daddy not today!" Is all you say when getting laid/
Sporting a chip on your shoulder...man I'm eating it up, you can try and do something, but this bully's taking your lunch/
My attack is overwhelming never ending like a death metal mosh pit, your name got you in a double bind, using circular logic/
Who would of knew this battle was a metaphore in creation, boy your name sais it all, cause your a no win situation/

(Catch-22 a book about ww2 the term catch 22 meant a no win situation or being in a double bind. Circular logic meant you couldn't avoid a combat mission. So in todays lesson "Catch-22" means your fucked...class dismissed)

Check.

-- Wed Jun 23, 2010 10:18 am --

Expos
Eminent- conspicuous, obvious/ play on the word imminent
Imminent- going to happen, impending, nearing, about to occur
http://www.reference.com/browse/eminent

My bars could put you quick to rest, finish your livin the best
But I'd rather have you simmer in stress to face an "Imminent Death"
I guess if all my bars killed this rookie-wishin-he's-Einstein
I could-be-fishin-the-line-dry this pussy's "gettin his nine lives"
Got him shook and trippin like "old flights"- push him and thinkin "he won't bite"
Our battle's a joke, right? 16 bars, homie, no- you bit off the whole site!
http://my16bars.com/bar/11549/Freestyle.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/intro ... nt#p141814

Enjoy your new avatar and you better stop feeding
I'd be hittin pussy 'steada gettin hit if ever caught cheating
So join Picasso and Shady, you unintelligent prick
This is "Benevolent Chris"- you've only seen my "Eminent shit"
So check on ev-e-ry "writ" to check if you'll ever be fit
I'll burn you alive with my flow like "sodium chemical kits"
Doesn't get better than this- there's no way you stackin ya weight son
My punches crack skulls like the logo of the band ya jackin ya name from
http://www.myspace.com/metaleminent


Imminent Death- (Eminent Death)
Einstein- (his use of exaggerated vocab)
(cats/pussies have nine lives)
Shook and trippin- Shaky flights/ Trippin- literally going on a trip
Also means scared and worried
thinkin he won't bite- Common phrase when you provoke someone, you push them to see if they'll bite. But in this case, it's a double entendre referring to him biting off of another site.

Punches: Catch
Multies: Catch
Wordplay/Nameplay: Catch
Creativity: Catch
Personals: Catch
Structure: Catch
Enjoyment: Catch

Overall: Catch 22

My Vote Goes 2 Catch, It Was An Obvious Catsweep & Catch BODIED em'

Punches: Catch
Multies: Catch
Wordplay/Nameplay: Catch
Creativity: Catch
Personals: Catch
Structure: Catch


Overall: Catch 22

Idk tho, cause apparently eminents not a biter according to riposte so I dont know how strong those biter lines are but overall catch still won

Flip man! CATCH takes this FULL STOP!

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