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Let me know how you guys are feeling about this. if you like it and want to hop on it let me know i'll pm you the track.

Yeah you coming along homie. Keep pushin it. Your flow is definitely gettin better.

This beat is sick lol so different.. personally i would have went hard... but the flow is nice laid back.. Got some nice metarphores in there... But on a couple bars it was a lil force like u had to speed up to fit it in...but over all this was actually nice...different as well...ups for some original shit dunny.1

The beat is ok.. Lyrics are good, flow is good, it was written well, need more to the verses,the beat style to me as flip said, it needs to be rapped harder.. other then thats its a good drop.

Track is missing emotion also wasn't feeling how it ended. Ur rhymes r on point tho I like ur flow man but it's jus missing emotion it would sound a lot better if u went it hard on da mic. I liked da beat it was sick. Work on ur emotion tho man up it up and I think you'll do fine in da chamber.

I already murk'd this track lulz...

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word thanks yall