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my bad bro was busy and tired as fuck and forgot all about it, yo this is my check same rules just post them for them to see bruh...

one....

5 Bars

Punches:
Multies:
Personals:
Wordplay/Nameplay:
Structure:

All These Cats Due in 24 Hrs G/L. Consider This My Check, I'm A Drop Later

-- Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:26 am --

Yo..

No Flow No Control Wit The Pen, We Know Ya Emo 4 What U Post in The Thread
U Suck BoNeS Niggas Know What It is, So Do Like Ya Avy & Keep Holdin' Ya Head!!

Cat's Hysterical & Doesn't Seem The Type 2 Carry Clips Less We Talkin' Cellular Phones
You'll Need A Miracle "B" Cuz The Dawgs I Run Wit Are Canine's Known 2 Bury Ya BoNeS

Sig Written in Flames, BoNeS I'm Way Out The Class of Average
I'll R.I.P Ya Scripts & Cremate Ya Remains 2 Apply Thee Ashes

After a Mental Relapse I'll Decapitate Both Yuh Kneecaps
BoNeS Don't Bother Rappin' Reverb is Ya Only Feedback!!

See Diligence is Elevation BoNeS, Here's a Casket 2 Rest in Yuh Rights
Only People Diggin' Ya Drops Bro is Archeologists at Excavational Sites!!

~1~

Ya flow seems elite but yet know one follows, your like an washed up Bobby and Whitney at the Apollo/
Was once on stage but now in front of the Apollo, doin somethin strange for some change fuck, suck, and swallow/
Creative is his motto...ha
and I'ma give a shouts out to this homos club.. "the homies lover, lovin thugs"../
Put a muzzle on his FUCKING mug, and then put this mutt to sleep/
I'm like Freddy with the heat...bringing terror in ya sleep best keep it at a dead silence whenever ya see me/
Id turn ya beautiful sunny day into a night mare on elm street/
the only thing you have cre@tive about you is the @ in your name g/
I SPIT OUT DAT GASOLINE ROTISSERIE ROASTING THE PUNCHING/
piss, and shit on it, right between the "eye-v-e"/ i-v-e, (in creative)
leaving him shit faceted like the seed of chuck-y/
uuuuhhh......

~Toilet Flushes~

clean sweep for creative. He came hard in this.

See Diligence is Elevation BoNeS, Here's a Casket 2 Rest in Yuh Rights
Only People Diggin' Ya Drops Bro is Archeologists at Excavational Sites!!

Dope ass closer right there and the hardest I've probably seen from you.

Decent Bones but that nigga just came hard on this..

bones i admit you came hard man but creative just won this one man , my vote goes to creative and here's why ;

1.punches - creative

2.personals - tie

3.wordplay/nameplay - creative

4.structure - creative

this is in my opinion , good battle guys

-KuU

Structure creative

Personals Creative...

Nameplay Creative

Structure Creative

Bones u were aiight but i saw some repetition.. like that apollo mention..was kinda repetitive or dragged out... the the shout out to the homo club? wtf? i dunno maybe i missed that but creative hit with every punch and that takes the piece of the pie

Damn, creative went hard with this. Swept it

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