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Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:22 pm
by Brah-Vo
HAI GUYZ
It's raiza sharp writin a bunch of bars again
And you know my dope turned on like Rell around Harlequin
Man im just playin rell is dope for real
But lemme propose a deal,
finna put all these dudes in a comatose for real
all these new cats write loose raps
like the hair on chew's back
so these whacks stay played like how a hoe would feel
So imma be forced to bite heads like these lames named holyfield

OMG seriously, but im not really usher
but i'll explode through your nose like hot english mustard
illest finna have A LOT of dead deers call these losers bambi
coz i'll count to ten and make em sleep like im super nanny.

and in all seriousness, these newbs as a collection would probably come up with:
oh my gosh shut up raiza, we can't stand ya
we'll leave this yellow skin bruised like a rotten banana
LOL. sad...

Re: Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:33 pm
by - Mutual -
where've you been dude, nothin spectacular here, a couple a funny bars but nothin i'd be too proud i can tell you are just messing around

Re: Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:26 pm
by Brah-Vo
man just chillin.
starting to rap againn.
thought id mess around with a few bars to start off with, drop some names haha.

Re: Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 12:26 am
by FlipSide
As far as this piece goes............I dunno?
Nothing spectacular exept for that banana line which was....Meh...
Man im just playin rell is dope for real
But lemme propose a deal,
finna put all these dudes in a comatose for real
I dont even know a rell but im shure he would not be impressed... i think if u were callin people out u should have a lil stronger........ Other than that... im the new guy...hi

Re: Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:46 am
by QwarterZ
lulz^^^^^^^^^^^^^

either way this was cool, seem'd like you was toying around
which is all good, but needs a bit more style to it
but then again this was for fun, so I can't say much
except..........keep writing

Re: Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:02 am
by FlipSide
He allways Says that^^^^

Re: Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:55 pm
by Brah-Vo
Flip...
hit up some illest history haha.

Re: Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 2:18 am
by HKX
haha u need 2 drop another like dis, dis was funny yo had me rolling nice drop.

Re: Just a bit of fun. No srsbizns here.

Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 2:27 am
by FlipSide
maybe i should right.... lol ... fuck it tho... Look foward not back.. so drop some hot shit dude