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Re: Un Cuento Antes De Dormir.

Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 4:58 pm
by Borat
I like this my son. Very emotional and self reflective. I am stoked to see the new poems poppin up from you keep em comin man they get better and better. Good poem playa.

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Re: Un Cuento Antes De Dormir.

Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:19 am
by FlipSide
My playground was dirt/
Or the angered part of the trailer park/

I wanted to look back…/
And have a good laugh…/ but it still breaks my heart/

I was a cub…/ a premature artist/
Just a kid following the noise down the tunnel/

I was in love…/ now I know what art is/
It’s communication for the boy in the bubble/
It shows who u are...or ur depiction of the person of the story paints the picture well... I really like that u going marianas trench on this lil part of the forum..I Enjoy reading moving drops like this...cuz in ways i can relate... Sorry for sleepin on this for so long..it is a dope drop