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First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:43 pm
by Darth Vader
Whats good famz,
I haven't posted any audio on this site yet, so take it in and let me know what ya'll think of this track. I go by DartVada/GrayGolden
-- Wed Jun 09, 2010 6:06 pm --
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:11 pm
by FlipSide
this was hot...mad energy.. beats off the hook and u got a good sound the hooks aiight.... good flow and vocab...nice drop
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 3:37 am
by HKX
I couldn't vote 4 this it didn't allow me 2 do it not sure why but yea I'd def bump dis homie beat was ill and flow was on point I actually played the track twice nice drop hope u drop more dawg
now would u bump dis right here
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/chi2c ... 16780.html
-- 09 Jun 2010 11:37 --
the hook goes hard combat type track
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:43 am
by Darth Vader
much respect ya'll, I have a lot more tracks, just waitin' to hear from at least 10 people on this one, then I'll drop the next..
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:48 am
by FlipSide
if u wanna get feedback its wise to leave feedback....just a pointer
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:28 am
by Munteskue_lol
10 people? Damn I don't know many people that get that.
Yea leave feedback on other peoples shit, too.
Good song. It was good production, and I would bump it on my ipod... but you could elevate your flow and vocab on the audio that's my constructive criticism
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 7:34 am
by Darth Vader
Proper, Ima do that right now..constructive criticism noted, Bless
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 9:47 am
by Loon E Lou
mmmm......yea this shit ku. yup like da energy. voice is ku. production is check. hook is..............a hook. good flow homie. shits str8 on my end. deffy sumtn i could throw on a mix. good one.
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:50 pm
by Darth Vader
Much respect for the feedback so far ya'll..
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:03 pm
by NoVeL
Mean!! Another ILL Song, You Remind Me of Shyne
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 5:04 am
by Darth Vader
Shyne huh? One of the sickest MC's no doubt, too bad he had to do that 10 year bid..appreciate the comment homie
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 2:47 pm
by Deciple
The beat is tight, your lyrics are good, delivery on point and clear, mad energy, hook is average, didnt stand out, i like your delivery style. Good Drop
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 6:15 am
by Darth Vader
Much respect homie.
Re: First Audio Post -Rap Heavy
Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:39 am
by K KiLLaH
This track was good but it could be better if you do exactly what u say ur gonna do and rap heavy!! like the flow was str8 but u should drop a haymaker of a punchline every 4 or 8 lines and stop the beat or something. Dont get me wrong ur flow was on point but this track deserves monster delivery on it. By the way who made this beat?