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Underground Emcee

Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:51 pm
by P.Picasso
I forge shit towards wars with a force which
Could cave your whole cerebral cortex if i'm sweated like foreheads
So forfiet sword edge is gone give you a sore neck
Got a new blade i'm breakin' in like new born horse legs
I'm not out my mind cuz i'm scared to even enter it
But my brain'll still make your head explode like heated temperments
Evil suggestions spit explicit and uncensored with
A lethal gentleness like dying in your sleep plus equal cleverness
People remember this i'll dismember you suckas
Out of curiosity towards exposin' skelatol structures
A bomber ready for busters all of you novice rappers
Can't control disasterous versus my nomenclatures
But fuck the big words i'll dig in your chest
With the jaws of life and leave your ass bitten to death
A risk to your breath so who'd want to battle a
Rapper who'll have you walk away like a discombobulated trantula
Combinations of rappers get blazed by the heat
Expected to suffocate as they get hanged by the feet
Get buried in concrete with a snorkle and small size hole with an oxygen mask breathing carbon monoxide
Flocks die
Comin' in camoflauge
To put appleseeds in banana clips and turn you into applesauce
It's that hot dude, drop it with brollicness
Slit your stomache and watch your guts spill like alcoholics anonymous

eh again just keying around

Re: Underground Emcee

Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:56 pm
by Borat
Mmm very nice for a key my son. Multies were off the hook man. Shit keep em comin man

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Re: Underground Emcee

Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:13 am
by QwarterZ
This was actually purdy dope
good job, nice lil' flow, nice multi usage
good choice of words, very well done
keep writing


































dipset...........bitch

Re: Underground Emcee

Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:35 am
by NoVeL
Not Bad.. Decent & Admirable Flow.

Re: Underground Emcee

Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 1:20 am
by FlipSide
Descent...ehhh dope drop... i think the metaphors and wordplay were cool...and the multies were tight... had some funny word play.. like the applesauce line that i chuckled at too... entertaining piece