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Use to want to be a certain way, race to church and pray
Nervous breakdown only to find the parts in perfect shape
Untill I learned to say what I actually felt was true & right
Held subdued so tight, as if it helped me through the night
I, myself knew inside.. longing for a sturdy shield of strength
Feelings engraved, unable to heal the pain in fields of shame
Peel & strain.. staring upwards as the clouds frown on me
My riches melted, the blisters settled.. tearing down alchemy
Frustration in a crushed haven, memories of a musk fragrance
Corrupt angels covered in dust, pavin' roads for abrupt changes
Its hard to trust patience when it never seems to arrive, so..
I sleep wide-eye'd with dreams of blindfolds, seeds of my hope
In the crease it strives slowly planted firm as I stand concerned
Spec of dirt in a can of worms.. how these sands have turned
My scorning pride shakes the conforming lights of mourning skys
Distorting lies tangled between according ties of warning signs
Ambushed by unforgotten thoughts that are sprung & lost in..
Some rotten rough areas run often into unspoken tongue gossip
Underneath vacant breath, it drags.. the days begin to stretch
Heart was grazed, then she left.. so sadly mistaken is the death
Fucking bitch.

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i think rugged might be pissed about the biting and expressin that i thought this was decent like it more than most u put on here but.... because of the shit u pulled have doubts that u even wrote it. if u did write this good job if u didnt ur a bitch

damn i thought t was tght till foind out u bit it

he even bites beats... try to explain ur way out of that one shady!!!!!

is It Possible You Can Get Sued 4 Stealing Someone's Shit Right??

Why bite?

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if he put as much effort into rhyming as he does stealin he could be good

damn. I thought this was a one time thing. LIke the 3rd thing I've seen recycled / bittin'. C'mon Shady!! Knock that off nigga. Even if it sucks, write ya own stuff. Your bound to get better.